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[acousticxmoose]

One chapter of Zinn down.

Here is the precis.

Comments and corrections greatly appreciated.

Comments

[lonely_guy89]

there are two minor errors in the first paragraph (just missing a few words).

Otherwise i thought it was awesome, and i wish i could write precis' like that.

And Since i haven't read the chapter, i can offer any content specific corrections, but i know this will help me when i read it, if that is any consolation.

[acousticxmoose]

thank you