Comments | acousticxmoose: 3 hours, 4 pages, 1 F

acousticxmoose

3 hours, 4 pages, 1 F

Jan 29, 2006 15:33

comments and corrections appreciated. thanks.

( WWI and its effects on business, race relations, women's suffrage, and prohibition )

Comments 5

anonymous January 30 2006, 00:56:07 UTC

this is not an F paper. it is really good. here is one mistake i caught: no biggie.

Although many groups and movements remained failure and division after the war, others saw success and progress

check grammar on that.

oops. anonymous January 30 2006, 01:06:25 UTC

^^^^ that was Ariel. sorry about that.

acousticxmoose January 30 2006, 01:09:52 UTC

thanks a bunch

anonymous January 30 2006, 01:58:16 UTC

^ I was there when you took that picture! cute. : )

<3 ariel

lonely_guy89 January 30 2006, 05:09:26 UTC

WOW!

rocks the socks off of mine. Well researched, well written, definatly an A, if at worst a B.

Check some grammer and stuff, and it shodl be fine.