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Fic: The View From Up Here - NC-17

Feb 10, 2012 18:25

Title: The View from Up Here
Pairings: Mike/Harvey
Word Count: 2,300
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sometimes Mike gets this look in his eye that is impossible to resist
Author's Note: This was written for suits-exchange, prompts from and written for veritas_st. Thank you forever to midnight_writer for helping me with ideas and encouraging me to get this finished. Enjoy!

( standing there with Harvey, this sharp electric buzz of something coursing back and forth between them, each movement no matter how minute only drawing further focus to the sudden change in the atmosphere between them )

! fic, - pairing: mike/harvey, character: mike ross, character: harvey specter, * fandom: suits

Comments 8

dancy_dreamer February 11 2012, 01:59:43 UTC

I read this over at the exchange and loved it, but I can't remember if I left a comment or not.

Your characterisation is brilliant. I love the way Mike is the one repeating that nothing will happen but he ends up throwing himself at Harvey who can blame him?

Harvey's kink for Mike's obedience is totally canon right?

acquiescence_ February 11 2012, 08:37:29 UTC

Argh thank you! Characterization is the thing that drives me up the wall most, and something I always feel like I need to work on more - so I'm glad this worked for you! :D

And yes, Harvey's kink for an obedient Mike is completely and totally canon. Forever and ever.

rippersgirl06 February 11 2012, 13:20:06 UTC

Fabulous story!

acquiescence_ February 12 2012, 01:59:25 UTC

Thank you!

emmajane14 February 11 2012, 18:10:44 UTC

Squealllllll! Fantastic.:)

acquiescence_ February 12 2012, 02:07:57 UTC

Thank you! :D

georgiesmith February 11 2012, 19:18:09 UTC

That was fab! Totally enjoyed this.

Looking forward to reading more from you!

hollybennett123 February 11 2012, 23:03:44 UTC

Nnnng, super hot! I loved this! ♥