I really liked the plot...but somehow, I think the characters should have been developed further...ok...I admit...I just want more of the angst...*rawr* god the idea of Shou's son gives me shivers....i mean...THE EYES...
thank you~ I know what you mean by character development, it will make the story longer and i cant stand to write a long fic *is not a good author and very slow in writing* you like angst?? YAY!! im an angst lover oh yes, of course the baby has Shou's big eyes ^0^
oooooooooooooh my god! you made shou a father? EEK! I didn't expect this ending ^^ shou and reita are definitely not my favorite pairing but the story was nice
I dont know where the idea of making Shou a father come from...it just popped to my head ^^'' they are not my favorite pairing, seriously. anyway, thank you for reading and commenting
I thought in the end,Reita would be together with Shou.LoL.What a nice turn.<333 I never though the ending would be like that..Shou had a son name Akira..
No~ this is hurt! Both for shou and reita! Yes, this is not my fav pairing too but the story is good. 'you can find a nicer one with nose' -> it sounds funny to me XDDD
Ow you finally finished the sequel~ I dont know whether to feel sad to shou or kinda scared. Mix of both i think. Kynya dia terobsesi bgt ma reita >.< Anyway great job and now you have finishe d with this i want a torapon one hehe *evil laugh*
you can feel sad for Shou's onesided love and be scare of his selfishness bcos he want to share distasteful feeling with reita... you torapon... will work on it soon XDDDD tapi janji bakal cepet jadinya he3
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god the idea of Shou's son gives me shivers....i mean...THE EYES...
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oh yes, of course the baby has Shou's big eyes ^0^
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you made shou a father? EEK!
I didn't expect this ending ^^
shou and reita are definitely not my favorite pairing but the story was nice
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they are not my favorite pairing, seriously.
anyway, thank you for reading and commenting
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I never though the ending would be like that..Shou had a son name Akira..
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yes, its akira kazamasa... or you can read it as 'reita and shou' lol
thank you for read~
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this is hurt! Both for shou and reita!
Yes, this is not my fav pairing too but the story is good.
'you can find a nicer one with nose' -> it sounds funny to me XDDD
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lol i like to make a joke with reita nose XDXDXD
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I dont know whether to feel sad to shou or kinda scared. Mix of both i think. Kynya dia terobsesi bgt ma reita >.<
Anyway great job and now you have finishe d with this i want a torapon one hehe *evil laugh*
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you torapon... will work on it soon XDDDD tapi janji bakal cepet jadinya he3
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