Vices: Chapter 4

[acutepencil]

Pairing: Het!Jonghyun/Key, side Les!Minkey
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word Count: 1,798
Summary: Junghee is crushed over a recent breakup when she meets Kibum. While neither of them have the best first impression, they realize they can learn from one another.
A/N: Back to 2 updates this week! Hooray!

We all have our vices.

Comments

[koukaiaru]

Okay, so, actually I am really enjoying this even though neither het nor les is exactly my cup of tea. I lament the absence of Key in this chapter though. I really like his character. Like, he's kinda mysterious but willing to open up for Junghee. Also obviously you couldn't get enough of him so we have Key AND Gwiboon here, I really like her character as well, I mean the fact you pushed all of his diva qualities into her. And Minjung is just the perfect best friend. Overall I enjoy the character development a lot. I think all of them are really vivid and well-thought-of.

It's good that you update quickly hehehe (^^') I'd really like to see where this is going.

[acutepencil]

haha sorry about the lack of Kibum in this chapter! Unfortunately he won't be in the next chapter either, but there will be a special appearance from someone else you might recognize ;D
I'm really glad you like the characters, they're so fun for me to write. I'm a little bit (read: a lot) in love with Minjung in this story, so I had to fight with myself to keep the minkey from stealing the show haha.

[cheo0o0]

ommgomgofgomgofuskdghlsdgmgodfjgl ;uuuu;

the minkey scene hehehHEHEHheHE <3 wonderful >uuu<

and of course more jongho bro convos. gosh, minjung is such a sweetheart fjkjlgkjskjgsdg /cries

i can't wait for the next one! ^^

[acutepencil]

THE MINKEYYYYYYY. my actual favorite. the next one will be up on thursday hopefully (if I can figure out these darn chapter breaks haha) but yeah! hope you like it babe <3

[blacknerdjade]

SURPRISINGLY I'm actually enjoying les!MinKey...who woulda thunk...

[acutepencil]

awww yeah! I love their dynamics so much in this. Especially Junghee-umma (she's not even a little bit based off me when I'm talking to my little sister, not even a little.)