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Sunbae-nim

Sep 20, 2012 00:06

Pairing: Taemin-centric
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,365
Summary: Taemin is a slut. A super slut.
A/N: Augh I'm sorry I haven't posted the epilogue of Vices yet, but I'm still getting adjusted to living in Japan. I swear I'm working on it and hopefully it'll be done soon. This is just a thing I did to get writing again, sorry if it's shitty. Enjoy!

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member: taemin, shinee

Comments 21

imvus September 19 2012, 21:10:06 UTC

Hate to think of him like this but then again if this is really what goes on in these entertainment companies, it would make sense the cycle would repeat.

acutepencil September 20 2012, 02:33:14 UTC

I didn't intend for Taemin to seem....evil, I guess. I just was pushing his (perceived) tendency to play around and get people to like him to extremes to see what it would be like. Thank you for reading!

imvus September 20 2012, 04:19:31 UTC

I didn't get that he was evil, maybe a little cold though.

And the message that he still needed to be liked came through at the end. (and the little bit of selfishness)

acutepencil September 20 2012, 06:40:53 UTC

Yes exactly! His need to be liked is what inspired me to write this in the first place, because it's only a short leap from selfishness and a need to be liked to becoming a tease like he is in this fic. I'm glad that those motivations came through so well!

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acutepencil September 20 2012, 05:57:45 UTC

Haha you saw Kai? That wasn't my intention at all but that's so funny that you did! Thank you for reading!

itsjustjodie September 19 2012, 21:22:22 UTC

for some reason i pictured Kai doing this lol
this was hot, taeminnie is bad to the boy, but yet something is there for him.
hot, very hot <3

acutepencil September 20 2012, 05:58:40 UTC

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

hiloser04 September 19 2012, 22:26:05 UTC

I can totes see Tae doing this...
Whether it had happened to him before or not.
This was so believable it hurt ok?
Kudos
Great job

acutepencil September 20 2012, 06:00:21 UTC

Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you can see this side of Taemin too. It's sometimes hard to see everyone's favorite sweet maknae show a darker side. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

deemonic September 20 2012, 00:04:45 UTC

Am I the only one who didn't imagine Kai at all, but some poor faceless, nameless trainee?
Still hot though. xP
Gosh save them boys if that's what's going on in these companies...

acutepencil September 20 2012, 06:01:27 UTC

Yeah I didn't really want the kid to be anyone special, I'm not even sure if he ended up debuting at the end, but I'm glad you liked it :) Thank you for reading!

hiloser04 September 20 2012, 18:53:23 UTC

I was reading it that way too! I automatically made Tae an older solo artist in my head.

acutepencil September 21 2012, 01:02:06 UTC

Yeah that was my intention, but you know shippers haha. they'll stick their pairing in wherever there's room :) I don't really mind that people thought it was Kai, but I have trouble seeing him that way because Taekai are such good friends, so I doubt Taemin would be so cold to him...you know? also Kai's not THAT much younger than Taemin.