New Fic: Rides to Town (Furuba)

[ada_farrow]

Title: Rides to Town
Fandom: Fruits Basket (manga)
Summary: Hatori drives Ayame to town and thinks of Kana.
Pairing: none, past Hatori/Kana
Rating: G

Comments

[jess_squared]

I liked how the story goes back from a memory to present time. You should really write more stories like this one. Maybe a series of short stories about the rest of the Sohmas in this style. I hope you write more!

~ JCarey

[ada_farrow]

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you appreciated it, since this is the first Furuba I've ever written.

And thanks also for the encouragement. I'll try to write more!

[sylc]

I love how you manage to turn the almost accident (with Ayame's shout) into such a wonderful climax. I thought that was great timing... and I agree with jess_squared - I also liked the memory to present time flow. A lovely piece.

P.S. I know very little about you, but I really enjoyed these last two Fruits Basket fics of yours and I very much appreciated your feedback on some of mine so I'm going to friend you. Hope you don't mind.

[ada_farrow]

Sweet! Thank you, I'll friend you back! ^__^ I'm not on lj very often, though, I come and go in spurts. (That sounds gross, but...) Since school's started again I'll probably be very busy. T__T But I'll try to check your journal when I can and see what's new! I love friends.

[sylc]

Pleasure. It's just as sweet on this end - hee! (^_^) *also likes friends* Thank you very much.