Unavailable - Chapter 13

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Title: Unavailable, Chapter 13
Authors: Bugs and Aussie
Rated: T
Genre: A/U, Drama, Romance
Word Count: 3,300
Chapter Summary: When Laura makes Carolanne a tempting offer, Bill steps in.

Comments

[newnumbertwo]

Why's my Laura scared and crying? *rushes to comfort her*

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Why's my Laura scared and crying? She's has a lot of history with fires! She's got the right to be a little upset! Luckily Jake and Bill are there to help out!

[newnumbertwo]

Just as long as she's okay. I don't want to be worried about her for a whole week.

[hollywobbles]

Rrrrr, Carolanne. What a pain. I hope Ishay and the rest of Laura's mod squad can figure something out quick.

AWWWWWWWWW, is Laura trying to prove she can cook??? So adorable!!!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Laura's mod squad. *snort*

AWWWWWWWWW, is Laura trying to prove she can cook??? I'm not sure if she is much better with the stove than she is with a tape recorder. :)

[anonymous]

Yes, it's 2 am and I was just going to bed, but I HAD to check for updates :D Soooo happy I found one! ^^ I truly loved all the scenes in this chapter, even though I'm not pretending to understand the last one at this hour :D

Laura pushed him away. "Bill," she hissed, "don't give away the full amount!"

"Bill, dammit--"

"Laura, dammit--"

Emily and Ishay exchanged worried looks. Elosha changed the stitch on the scarf she was knitting.

LMAO!!! I loved the serious stuff as well, and the scenes with Ishay.

Awesome update, you two :)))))

Roni

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Yes, it's 2 am and I was just going to bed, but I HAD to check for updates :D Soooo happy I found one! You know, if you just gave in and got a username, you could join the comm and you'd know if we'd updated...

I truly loved all the scenes in this chapter, even though I'm not pretending to understand the last one at this hour We're surprised people are finding it confusing! Maybe it will all be more obvious at a reasonable hour. :)

I'm glad we gave you a giggle at least.

♥

[anonymous]

You know, if you just gave in and got a username, you could join the comm and you'd know if we'd updated...

You know, someone was supposed to help me make one over a year ago *looks at your other writing half* But I'm so used to checking the comms now that I'd rather she writes more than spends the time making me a LJ :)

We're surprised people are finding it confusing! Maybe it will all be more obvious at a reasonable hour. :)

I remember the last scene that involved lots of smoke and that explains Laura's terrified state, but I can't understand what exactly was she doing in the first place!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

You know, someone was supposed to help me make one over a year ago Get a plain ol' page! I did for a long, long time!

I remember the last scene that involved lots of smoke and that explains Laura's terrified state, but I can't understand what exactly was she doing in the first place! She had a skillet. ;)

[smpolyglot]

Whew, Bill's not as bad as I thought, even though he's still annoying me just a little now. And someone needs to take out Lee's cajones from out of Carolanne's purse and hand them back to him, like yesterday.

And poor Laura, no one has any confidence in her. Her board has no confidence in her business skills and her friends have no confidence in her survival skills. Then you have, Oh My Gods, Laura trying to prove her friends wrong by trying to cook, in a mink coat no less?(dies laughing) This is Laura's idea of roughing it, isn't it? (I know I shouldn't laugh at poor Laura, but the image in my head is just too adorable, and giggle-worthy) This was the best chapter ending!!!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Whew, Bill's not as bad as I thought, Yes, we thought everyone may see his side of the story this chapter! Give the man a break! *hugs Bill*

And someone needs to take out Lee's cajones from out of Carolanne's purse and hand them back to him, like yesterday. Oh, blah. He was a mummy's boy in canon even though she perished in the attacks!

And poor Laura, no one has any confidence in her. Her board has no confidence in her business skills Well, we all know she'll prove them all wrong one day!

This was the best chapter ending!!! Yay! We're glad you liked it!

[alesia027]

LOL I just adore that Laura wanted to prove to everyone that she could do without money and burnt dinner!!!

I see that Bill's completely clueless. It is interesting that Bill has had those kinds of conversations with the Board. He should ave given his stocks to Saul. Saul could have voted him in as CEO. :)

[bsg_aussiegirl]

LOL I just adore that Laura wanted to prove to everyone that she could do without money and burnt dinner!!! It worked for Kat Hepburn in Woman of the Year...

I see that Bill's completely clueless. Clueless or not clueless? He's understanding the situation with the board, at least! More than Laura! We can't help it that he has faith in his own sons.

[alesia027]

yes, there was supposed to be a NOT in there. I should know better than to type in the middle of the night!