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Unavailable Chapter 15

Mar 19, 2012 13:57

Title: Unavailable, Chapter 15
Authors: Bugs and Aussie
Rated: M
Genre: A/U, Drama, Romance, Humour
Word Count: 3,400
Chapter Summary: Bill and Laura reunite while Carolanne moves forward with her plans to keep them apart.

( She's been playing you like a violin )

m, title: unavailable

Comments 27

defyingnormalcy March 19 2012, 04:15:56 UTC

And my hatred of Carolanne only continues to deepen....

YES TO THE REUNION SEX! :P I do like the conversation that they have (in between the sex, heh) it reminds me of Laura's conversation with Bill when she tells him that Cain needs to be eliminated. I really liked that parallel (hopefully that was intentional? lol)

LEE YOU ARE THE TOOL OF TOOLS!!!! I hope that he and Mommy Dearest get theirs in the end. *rubs hands together in Mr. Burns style*

Saul is just too precious for words. Seriously, I have mad love for that man. *hugs Saul* Emily and Peter are mega adorbz as well, as is Elosha. *group hug for the supporting cast*

Also - OMFG CAROLANNE IS MOUNTING THE STAIRS THIS CANNOT BE A GOOD THING!!!!! CAN SOMEONE JUST PLEEEEEASE PUSH HER VERY FORCEFULLY DOWN THE STAIRS!?!?!?!?!?!

bsg_aussiegirl March 19 2012, 12:48:40 UTC

I think both Bugs and I always have Bill and Laura yapping during secksy times, even when we write separately. More often than not I picture Laura going on and on about something and Bill being more 'male' and quite often losing his place in the conversation because *other* things are distracted him. Hee.

Yes, the line was supposed to reflect Pegasus. It was the rewatch that did it. ;)

Poor Lee. He was being nice in this chapter and we still roll our eyes at him!

Thank goodness you're still enjoying the supporting cast's scenes, because somehow there seemed to be a lot of them in this chapter.

Of course she's mouting the stairs. It's our cliffhanger!!!

defyingnormalcy March 19 2012, 15:04:13 UTC

Yes, the line was supposed to reflect Pegasus. It was the rewatch that did it. ;)

Hee! That line came to my mind as well! *high-fives*

Of course she's mounting the stairs. It's our cliffhanger!!!

A rather nice cliffhanger this time! It still leaves open the possibility that poor terrified Jake will bounce off the door or overcome his fear, change the direction of his mad running and bump forcefully into Carolanne ]:D Mwahahah!

Poor clueless Saul and Elosha glaring at him made me LOL :D So cute! ^^

Roni

bsg_aussiegirl March 20 2012, 12:15:11 UTC

Bugs and I never thought about Jake tripping Carolanne up on the stairs, but I'm now madly taking notes. ;)

I do think Saul can be quite clueless when it comes to women in general sometimes in canon. I think it's because he always acts like himself, no matter who he's talking to. Female presidents, female pilots or female knuckledraggers, they all get the same Saul Tigh as male ones get really. Bill, on the other hand, becomes an instant gentleman!

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newnumbertwo March 19 2012, 05:27:25 UTC

Troublemaker!numbertwo will behave this week. Nice job, ladies, as always!

bsg_aussiegirl March 19 2012, 12:43:03 UTC

I had to go and have a look at the last chapter to see what you meant! LOL!

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bsg_aussiegirl March 19 2012, 12:42:05 UTC

Fireflies review!! Yay!!

alesia027 March 19 2012, 16:29:57 UTC

Oh CRAP!!! Jake is going to be Laura and Bill's downfall and he doesn't even know it. Someone really needs to take Lee out to the wood shed, not for dating a prostitute but for not having any faith in his own father and being completely blind to his mother. Is Zak going to come to the rescue on this subject or maybe Kara?

Seriously, Bill's thoughts while he and Laura were on the couch were a wonderful echo of cannon. It was quite beautiful.

bsg_aussiegirl March 20 2012, 12:17:15 UTC

At least Lee was getting hints about his mother's behaviour and drinking in this chapter. He's still oddly ignorant to his father's epicness though, so that's a bit of a worry.

Glad you thought their 'couch thoughts' fit well.

:)

hollywobbles March 20 2012, 13:50:17 UTC

Yay, finally!!!

Aiiieeeee, oh noes! Jake, trip her, STAT!

ETA: And Emily/Laird ftw! Too bad Saul went with... he should've stayed behind -- with Elosha! *will die on that ship*

bsg_aussiegirl March 21 2012, 11:31:02 UTC

Finally? Yeah, I know we're late, and I was going to give an excuse, but...you know...rl, yeah, yeah.

Why had Bugs and I never once thought of Jake tripping her on the stairs? OH, that's right, we need to stretch out the drama!

Emily/Laird. ♥ My second OTP, truefax!

Saul/Elosha. ♥ Way too funny to stop now!

hollywobbles March 21 2012, 13:08:37 UTC

Lol, no, yay finally, as in finally they're back together. ;)