Unavailable - Chapter 19

Aug 13, 2012 10:23

Title: Unavailable
Authors: aussie and bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating:T
Word Count: 3,300
Summary: As everyone watches in shock, the Adams marriage ends.

When I saw you walkin' the docks that first time, I thought you lookin' for some lowdown action and I guessed right. They've got a name for women like you-- )

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hollywobbles August 13 2012, 03:14:36 UTC
SO MUCH I AM NOT HAPPY ABOUT.

Except that they have a plan. That's good. Also: Kara and Tigh being sneaky. I still have hope.

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bsg_aussiegirl August 13 2012, 05:53:11 UTC
I didn't think it was *that* bad! LOL Would have been worse if Bill hadn't told CA he couldn't fulfil his marital duties. ;)

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mellow_mel August 13 2012, 10:13:22 UTC
And the plot thickens ( but not bills poor penis;)
Jake was wonderful again as always!
This series has been so much fun!

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bsg_aussiegirl August 13 2012, 12:40:57 UTC
Poor ol' Jake didn't have much of a part this chapter! Oh well, he got to be the star last time. :)

Glad you think it's fun!

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anonymous August 13 2012, 10:23:18 UTC
What a well executed plan! Bill and Laura's acting was great :) I was laughing so hard at the first scene and then at Bill and Carolanne :D Laura totally has the best ideas :D :D

Herman? Sherman, is that you?! :O

Lee is the toolest tool ever :D

Jaaaaake ♥ Of course he's glad to be away from the howler monkey for a while ^^

Enzo, you slimy little...

So glad to see a new chapter! Hugs to you both!

Roni

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bsg_aussiegirl August 13 2012, 12:46:10 UTC
Poor ol' Bill. His scar gets to come in handy in fanfic and excuses to keep out of Carolanne's bed!

No Herman's not Sherman. Sherman's Sherman. He's been in this universe before! Remember he was smelling the almonds way back in Unbreakable!

Lee is a tool. Also highly susceptible to Zarek in canon. Which was quite strange when you think of his father's complete and utter hatred of the man throughout.

Jake had a bit of a rest this chapter. We'll have to think of new and exciting ways to use him again soon!

Hugs back! Glad you're still reading!

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anonymous August 13 2012, 20:27:40 UTC
No Herman's not Sherman. Sherman's Sherman. He's been in this universe before! Remember he was smelling the almonds way back in Unbreakable!

OMG, I completely forgot! *headdesk*

Hugs back! Glad you're still reading!

Where else would I be? :P

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lydgate71 August 13 2012, 13:25:52 UTC
I love this AU: the Tracy/Hepburn thing is hilarious and suits them so well!

Everything is looking bleak, but the phone call and Bill's save with the scar explanation make it bearable. Still, I'm looking forward to seeing everyone back where they belong (and, if I'm perfectly honest, seeing Lee suffer a little along the way...).

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bsg_aussiegirl August 13 2012, 23:04:29 UTC
Thanks! Glad to hear you love it! MM and EJO need to do some sort of romantic comedy with lots of banter. It would be epic. (Apparently they had to continually tell them not to be so funny on bsg! LOL)

I'm glad you enjoyed the phone call. It would have been a bit mean of us to leave the chapter there without it. Lee suffer...mmm...now would Bugs and I ever want to do that...definitely!

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alesia027 August 13 2012, 18:57:44 UTC
My my my things are really starting to take shape. Lee with Zarek (because of the whore I would bet), Zak - I am able to read but willing to do what his father has asked of him, Kara & Saul conspiring together to find out the truth about Carolanne, Laura & Bill with some crazy sceam of their own. That board meeting is going to be one for the ages.

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bsg_aussiegirl August 13 2012, 23:06:58 UTC
Lee with Zarek because of the whore? Mmm...perhaps not. Lee is with Zarek in canon without her, after all. I do realise that Tom was supposed to be quite charismatic, but Lee's belief in him is often unnerving.

The board meeting. Oh dear. We need to get cracking and write it! We're hoping you'll enjoy the way it turns out!

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