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FIC: Unpresentable ~ Chapter 1

Dec 11, 2013 22:49

Title: Unpresentable ~ Chapter 1
Authors: bsg_aussiegirl & bugs
Rating; T
Word Count: 2,300
A/N: A gift fic for nixmom and all the patient readers still waiting for us to get it together!

( Laura had finally come up with a unique idea for Bill’s Christmas gift, and it seemed he was going to spoil the surprise )

stand-alone, t

Comments 10

anonymous December 12 2013, 17:47:30 UTC

OMG YAAAAAAAAAAY, I thought this would be a one-shot!!! YAY for chapters!!! \o/\o/\o/

I love the image of Laura raising an eyebrow ♥

"My husband--” Laura broke off. “My husband,” she repeated, feeling faint.

LMAO!!! Of course they'd end up at the same place! And Jaaaake!!! ♥♥♥

There was a district huffing noise from behind the screen.
[...]
Laura came bursting out from behind the screen. "Over my dead body!" she barked.

LOL!!! Those might be my favourite 2 lines/images from this chapter. God, I missed this! Thank you both for this Christmas gift, it is most appreciated! ^^

Roni

bugsfic December 16 2013, 05:49:49 UTC

You know us. We just have to ramble on!

And we have to do Jake, for you most of all!

It's so fun to have these two sparking off each other again. Glad you enjoyed the result!

olafur_neal December 13 2013, 08:00:09 UTC

You're killing me. Well and truly killing me. The minute I knew she was going to buy more shunga I knew it was perfect. Then all the awkward and flirting. I just...

bugsfic December 16 2013, 06:25:05 UTC

I did have sort of a moment where I thought, wait, we're having the Adams go out and buy what was considered pornography at the time...Oh well! LOL!

olafur_neal December 16 2013, 07:59:12 UTC

Well y'know it's for educational and collection purposes...yeah that works. LOL!

lydgate71 December 14 2013, 21:09:36 UTC

She looked down her nose at him. "I don't find your thoughts very pleasant at the moment."

He only grinned.

The Adams are so perfect it hurts.

bugsfic December 18 2013, 05:15:14 UTC

They make me smile. :D As fun as they are to read, they've twice and fun to write, let me tell you.

hollywobbles December 17 2013, 19:50:40 UTC

Ha! Shunga. Too funny. :D

So happy to see the Adamses having such a merry Christmas together. ;D

bugsfic December 18 2013, 05:13:59 UTC

Yes, we had to go There! *snort*

We've got to get into our Adamsverse mode by keeping it simple and sweet. :D

urania16 December 27 2013, 12:20:44 UTC

OMG this is such a lovely treat so many words, I thought we would get drabbles, but this is just perfect.
To mention the drawings again is perfect, and I loved the scene in the store when she finds out he's there and he goes on teasing her a bit. I loved it!!!!