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FIC: Unpresentable ~ Chapter 2

Dec 22, 2013 15:41

Title: Unpresentable ~ Chapter 2
Authors: bugs and Aussie
Rated: M
Word Count 3150

( Mrs Claus? Oh, she’s so special, she made both lists; naughty and nice! )

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Comments 8

olafur_neal December 23 2013, 07:16:49 UTC

Love it!!! I don't even know where to start with how much I love it. I mean the flirtiness, the Mr. And Mrs. Clause thing, the aching muscles... I just can't. Although that kid's questions about Jake have me a little worried.

bugsfic December 26 2013, 07:06:20 UTC

They do flirt so well, even for an old married couple. Always one of the things I loved best about the 'real' Bill and Laura!

Although that kid's questions about Jake have me a little worried.

LOL! Just the usual little kid nosiness! No worries. This story is 100% fluff. No mystery to be solved. (Although you're giving me a dognapping story idea!)

olafur_neal December 26 2013, 07:50:14 UTC

No I didn't mean it! *cuddles Jake close* I need Jake to be safe!!! I would read the hell out of that story tho...lol! :)

mellow_mel December 23 2013, 13:35:09 UTC

bugsfic December 26 2013, 07:07:11 UTC

We try to be worthy of a smile!

anonymous December 24 2013, 18:57:46 UTC

Awwwww, I could hug this chapter, it's adorable and hilarious!!! So many Jake moments, OMG!!! <333333333333333

Roni

bugsfic December 26 2013, 07:08:51 UTC

We gave up any pretext of fic noir, and went straight for fluff! And nothing is fluffier than a cute dog!

urania16 December 27 2013, 12:35:29 UTC

Okay I was laughing out loud when those kids kinda took over the place and Laura's reaction to it. I could see it all happening in front of me.
Bill as a Santa, where to begin? His interaction with those kids was priceless, and then he got all flirty with Mrs. Claus, how much more perfect can it get?
I loved it.