im fine, who cares. read this.

[adamvstheworld]

Ok so in my creative writing class we have to write a piece about a certain event in our life. im not happy with mine and i have til wednesday to make it better. im tired so someone else help me. its about my first earthquake. so any feedback would be good

Comments

[alicatt0072]

you're amazing. i miss you.

[fleetingasfall]

Although this is late, the only error I see is the word 'amongst.' I used to love that word, but my English teacher informed me that it was only common in the 1800s and should now be replaced with 'among.' In regards to actual feedback, however; it's beautiful.

[surewood4est]

i heart my brother!