hum..I guess I am still alive.

[adarkwhitelight]

I figured I would through this up as a bouncing board to think what you guys thought of my very first college paper. Input would be much appreciated! Well I'm off to camping at Cedar Bend for the weekend

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[messiahs_misfit]

I like this alot...it stays on point and you aren't really biaesed it was a compaire on contrast through and through so rock and roll I love it.

[imaflamethrower]

I like it too! Not many gramatical errors either! I only counted one or two. You are enthusiasic for your first couple college papers, but eventually you will become indifferent. Well, at least that is what happened to me. :-P Much love to you.

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[anonymous]

check your e-mail. I made some punctuation and grammar corrections for you, you might want to check these out before turning it in if possible. Basically, an excellent contrast! Keep it up. Love mom

[fromredtowhite]

LOL your mom is awesome!