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Jul 18, 2011 22:14

where the river forks
the eagle (esca/marcus)
540 words. for dreamofthem and heartequals, who asked me for kissing in the rain. so I wrote some. here you go, dudes. ♥

( where the river forks )

pairing: esca/marcus, fandom: the eagle

Comments 36

dreamofthem July 19 2011, 05:14:28 UTC

PERFECTION.

oh boy.

kissing, in the rain, and there was some more rain, and some more kissing. and then Esca asks what next and it's MORE KISSING. great minds, marcus. great minds.

which is to say, uhhh. you're perfect. all the cookies for you.

♥ ♥ ♥

dreamofthem July 19 2011, 05:14:46 UTC

(kiisssssinnnnngg!!!!!)

heartequals July 19 2011, 05:20:48 UTC

(in the raaaaaaaaain!!!!!!!)

addandsubtract July 20 2011, 00:27:52 UTC

I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT. because, yes, that is the reason for it at all. and. stuff. THOUGH I COULD PRETTY MUCH WRITE MAKING OUT IN THE RAIN FOREVER.

♥ ♥ ♥

(seriously, y'all are delightful.)

heartequals July 19 2011, 05:20:28 UTC

So we went out grocery shopping and we came back minding our own business and Ella got to the business of snooping in my email AND LO AND BEHOLD THE GREATEST THING THAT HAD/WILL EVER HAPPEN TO US HAPPENED.

And lo. It was good.

No, great. Great!!! Kissing!!!! In the rain!!! Kissing!!!!!

Ella would like to add that her favorite part is how they sheltered from the rain and still got rained on, while kissing.

Ugh, this fic can stand under my umbrella. (My leaky umbrella, Ella adds, so it still get rained on.) I LOVE IT THAT MUCH.

You can also stand under my leaky umbrella. Oh man. This is everything I wanted and more. And then some more after that too. You, my friend, are the greatest.

addandsubtract July 20 2011, 00:30:53 UTC

I HAD GOOD TIMING AFTER ALL! presents after grocery shopping is what I wish would always happen to me.

and sdlghasg man I am glad that you like this! ♥! though now I'm seriously going to have umbrella stuck in my head for the rest of the day.

and I don't even know there's something to be said for people kissing while they're being rained on.

carmarthen July 19 2011, 06:47:18 UTC

This is absolutely lovely. Gorgeous writing, and gorgeous feeeeelings, and communicating in that awkward way they have. ♥

addandsubtract July 20 2011, 00:31:19 UTC

thank you so much! they are so utterly full of feelings it makes them so fun to write. sdgkhz;slgkh ♥

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addandsubtract July 20 2011, 00:31:28 UTC

thank you!

ladytiferet July 19 2011, 11:49:26 UTC

Beautiful little gem, this story ;)

addandsubtract July 20 2011, 00:31:36 UTC

thank you so much! :D