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PART ONE

Comments

[a_jejune_star]

AHHHHHHHH MY HEART

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holy shit, this comment. WHAT ARE YOU EVEN.

seriously, I am so glad that you like it, and that mark seems in character to you, and the au works!

SO OVERWHELMED BY THIS COMMENT, HELLO. ♥

[silviakundera]

OMG THANK YOU. This is everything I ever wanted in a Mark/Eduardo fic. Mark turning back from the temptation of power & success and examining what he really wants. WHY DO PEOPLE NOT WRITE THIS ALL THE TIME?

Not only is it thematically something I've been yearning for in M/E fic, but every paragraph of this was absolutely gorgeous. You have a lovely way with words. Thank you for sharing this. ♥

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dude, what even. THANK YOU SO MUCH, FOR REAL. I am so glad that you like this! parts of this were such a struggle, so I'm seriously happy to hear that it worked for you. ♥

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boys are terrible with feelings, seriously. why are they so stupid? thank you so much for reading! :D

[kristiinthedark]

God, do I love road-trip type fics, what with all the discovery and sex and feelings and more sex, and did this ever fit the bill. Loved it SO MUCH.

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thank you so much! I'm obsessed with writing road trips, in case you couldn't tell. ha. I'm glad that you like this! :D

[mathab]

This was perfect. Just...absolutely breathtaking. I've said it a million times and I'll say it again - I LOVE road!trip/travelling fics and this is just....this is my favourite.
I loved your Mark and your Eduardo. How Mark didn't want to leave himself vulnerable by admitting he needed Wardo, by trying to show how much he wanted him, that he chose him but how he found it hard to say...ugh just so beautiful.
Everything was beautiful and perfect and I love this forever!

[addandsubtract]

oh, man, thank you! I also love the road trip fics! and I'm so happy to hear that the characterizations worked! FOR REAL. ♥