This is pretty fascinating. Jackson's my favorite character so seeing him so conflicted and trapped both in a good and bad way, strong yet weak, is so compelling. What is really something is that I can't tell where Derek's head is. I think he loves Jackson but whether its in a healthy way or not, it's hard to see. Or maybe I'm hoping he loves him and its healthy but the Derek here may not be capable of that so this is as close as he can get. Wild stuff.
thank you! I sort of wanted to stay out of derek's head, since jackson really don't understand derek's feelings at all. but I'm glad that the characterization of jackson, here, makes sense to you! he's definitely one of my favorite characters in the series.
wow. i never really liked this pairing but i really liked this one. I loved that Derek was really caring but at the same time still in character. it was very lovely and so right! very good read :D i enjoyed it. praise praise etc. XD the predatory way you made derek was so spot on. wolves irl are such dicks sometimes <3
thanks! I realize that this is totally not the most popular pairing in this fandom, but I'm glad that you gave this story a shot anyway! and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D
HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING IT'S LIKE YOU'RE MADE OF MAGIC.
a) “You’re still afraid of me,” Derek says into his ear. “I can smell it on you.” b) “You can pretend that you don’t like it, but you’d be lying to yourself. All those things you weren’t supposed to want, and all I had to do was ask.”
Just, this is my Jackson. Perfection. It's 2am and I don't even care~
I love, love the way you've written Jackson. He's so vulnerable but at the time he has such persistence. You show the struggle between his human instincts and his werewolf ones, but also that that struggle has always been there- in Lydia's section especially, she points out how he's always wanting things he wishes he didn't (and tries to pretend that he doesn't). Also, Derek's observations at the start of xi. He's got your number, Jackson.
SO PRETTY MUCH JACKSON'S ALL "SET PHASERS TO 'LOVE ME'"
Woah! This story was unbelievably hot! Derek/Jackson used to be my OTP and even though it's changed to Derek/Stiles I still LOVE this pairing! <3333 This has been my favourite Derek/Jackson story that I've read so far. I just want to go read it again now haha.
Anyways, GREAT STORY! You are immensely talented <3333
I'm probably the only person in this entire fandom who doesn't ship derek/stiles, ahahaha. but I'm glad that you like this! it was great fun to write! jackson and derek are so much fun to put at odds.
This fic is WONDERFUL! i'm another non-derek/stiles shipper! we're out there.. somewhere.. there just aren't that many of us.. ahahaha! once again, though, this fic is amazing! it's my favourite derek/jackson so far!! :'D
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a) “You’re still afraid of me,” Derek says into his ear. “I can smell it on you.”
b) “You can pretend that you don’t like it, but you’d be lying to yourself. All those things you weren’t supposed to want, and all I had to do was ask.”
Just, this is my Jackson. Perfection. It's 2am and I don't even care~
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also can I just tell you how relieved I am that this characterization makes sense to you? ALSO I FUCKING LOVE WRITING LYDIA SHE IS THE MOST FUN.
hello hi I love you I hope you are less tired/stressed! ♥
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Also, Derek's observations at the start of xi. He's got your number, Jackson.
SO PRETTY MUCH JACKSON'S ALL "SET PHASERS TO 'LOVE ME'"
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also SET PHASERS TO LOVE ME is pretty much my favorite emotional state to write who am I kidding
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Anyways, GREAT STORY! You are immensely talented <3333
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