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[addandsubtract]

see two young, savage things
attack the block (pest/moses)
1,006 words. pg-13, mostly for remembered violence and language. pre-slash! goddamn but the dialogue in this movie is difficult to reproduce effectively. hopefully the voice isn't too off! for gdgdbaby, because she asked me to. this probably isn't what you wanted, bb, but I hope it serves just the

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[gdgdbaby]

OH NO... MADDY... TEARS, TEARS ON THE SIDE OF MY FACE

BUT OH MY GOD YES THIS IS PERFECT. YOUR PEST AND YOUR MOSES ARE PERFECT AND I WANT TO DIE, FML. lack of brain-to-mouth filter pest always! and moses who gets it and god, how fucked up both of them are and how they cope with it ;_; the third paragraph fucking kills, and of course moses is dealing with it with as much grace as he can muster and pest is falling apart at the seams, oh my heart ;_;

I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS WONDERFUL ;_____; ♥♥♥

[figletofvenice]

GOD LUCY I AM VERY RELIEVED. (also I can't actually reply to comments on lj using addandsubtract at the moment, since the new comments page doesn't work for me, so sorry about the crossover here.)

I AM JUST SO GLAD THAT THIS MAKES SENSE AND THAT THE CHARACTERIZATIONS MAKE SENSE and just. yes. they are two against the world! no one else really gets it! and I just like writing about people falling apart, who am I kidding.

I AM JUST SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT LUCY SERIOUSLY. ♥ ♥ ♥

[davyjonesing]

augh, god this fic. these stupid boys. this hurts like a faded bruise or shortness of breath or.. i don't know, they're so old but they're really only babies and I hate the idea of them hurting but love the idea of them hurting together.

wow I don't know, but this was lovely. truly.

[figletofvenice]

thank you so much. ♥

love the idea of them hurting together.
yes, yes, this, exactly. thank you so much for reading!

[saba1789]

Oooh, I really liked this! Lovely coda to the movie :D Thanks for writing and sharing this! <3