New Fic! On/Tae NC17 Pretty Boy in Pink

Aug 13, 2012 04:52

Author addicterated
Title Pretty Boy in Pink
Pairing Onew/Taemin
Genre Romance, Erotica, BDSM
Rating NC17
Word Count 5065
Warnings Jinki being insanely hot, does that count? Power exchange, light cross dressing, Dominance/Submission, Spanking, Toys... Voyeurism *SIR is Onew just fyi*
Summary On a business trip to a conference, Taemin is mistaken for a working ( Read more... )

ontae, my fic: pretty boy in pink, nc17

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min7girl August 13 2012, 08:56:00 UTC
SPOT!!!

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min7girl August 13 2012, 08:56:52 UTC
So now I am reading this all in one go and going to be all kinds of hot and bother by it! Yes I am. Be back to comment more in a minute!
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So it starts off with the sweater. Yes that unrepentantly hot bit a fabric that clung so viciously to every muscle of Jinki's traveling chest. Hell yes I can see why Taemin was staring at that and wanting to whore himself out even before the man showed up at his table.

Then there is the way Jinki propositions him. The book, the clothes, the get you sexy pretty boy butt to my room or else. Lovely.

You of course do the build up of tension so very well. and then there is the claiming and release moments throughout. Each building block a step both of them take it slightly further until they are lost to the feeling of it.

Sigh.

So very sexy.

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addicterated August 14 2012, 00:28:13 UTC
I often worry that the "climax" is almost a let down cause I build everything up and then, bam... lol.

So glad you enjoyed it :)

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super_ontae August 13 2012, 10:19:54 UTC
spot!!!
Cliffhanger.i mean it's so fucking hot until i can't get enough off.i though it longer than this LOL
You havent write like decades,and it's good like always

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addicterated August 14 2012, 00:28:45 UTC
I know, I've been so blocked and there's so much ... not good going on rl and yeah but it was great to write again. Glad you liked. :)

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super_ontae August 15 2012, 17:19:16 UTC
that's good,
Yeah,writer's block happen to almost everyone xD
i'm wait for your next story kekeke~ XD

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lifeinaphantasy August 13 2012, 12:51:33 UTC
Holy hell, I'll be back to leave a proper comment after I finish my shift at work!
But this alone is going to help me get through this god awful day. :)

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addicterated August 14 2012, 00:29:08 UTC
Glad to be of help and that you enjoyed. Thanks :)

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undeniablysarah August 13 2012, 15:19:41 UTC
Perfection. I don't understand how you do it but you do.
The Sir you have written is just so dominating but still isn't a complete asshole, its very difficult to write someone of that nature and you do it spot on every time.
Taemin gets lost so fast in the feels of having his fantasies realized I can't imagine how wonderful that must be.
It seems like this story will only get better so i am looking forward to more.

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addicterated August 14 2012, 00:29:41 UTC
Lol. You know I worry I am writing the same thing over and over. I'm glad you enjoyed. :) Thank you!

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guitar_girl_z August 13 2012, 15:29:09 UTC
Oh God, you're back. And as always, you never disappoint. The sexual tension is just...FERV#%$&%^Y#@%^GB HG. Can I hope for more? *hint hint nudge nudge sequel cough cough* ;)

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addicterated August 14 2012, 00:30:23 UTC
Eh well, I am so not lucky with sequels and this is/was considered to be a one possibly two shot but we will see. Meanwhile, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you!

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