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Accusation On/Tae 30 Day Writing Challenge

Aug 17, 2012 02:48

894 words of more angsty goodness. 2nd day.
1st day RESTLESS"So..." Jinki begins, pulling Taemin into his room as everyone is crawling into bed to catch whatever sleep is available. His face is serious and there's a look there that Taemin can't interpret even though he thinks he's seen every expression Jinki has ever worn ( Read more... )

ontae, prompt: accusation, 30 days of writing challenge

Comments 9

min7girl August 17 2012, 15:18:22 UTC

And so the confrontation. What are they going to do now? You have left me all kinds of worried for them. Taemin wants to hold JInki in his arms again and know everything will be ok.

addicterated August 23 2012, 15:07:41 UTC

Jinki has to release all his feelings, even acknowledge that he has them. That their break up has left him doubting himself in lots of little ways. Their relationship is so pivotal for him it's like losing a main support of a tall building and then the whole thing crumbles. But everything will be okay. If it's not okay, then it's not over, right? :)

seungjiyeon August 17 2012, 15:52:12 UTC

Wow!

I thought that Onew forgave Taemin (the way he acted on the first part, he didn't show any sign of anger or etc..)

I rarely see Onew being harsh and rude towards Taemin, I was like O_O at this :

"Oh you're asking, all right," Jinki scoffs. "I... we all... have spoiled you so much for so long... you think you only have to look cute and moon about a bit to get whatever you want. So what is it Taemin? Not satisfied with your other friends? Need some quality time with someone who knows how to make you scream?" He hisses the words out, every single one of them burning his tongue and stabbing at his heart. His fists curl up despite himself and his glance at Taemin is accusing.

But Onew can'T stay mad at Taemin for too long, I know he can't!

Thanks for sharing :D

addicterated August 23 2012, 15:08:02 UTC

Wait and see. Thank you for reading :)

imvus August 17 2012, 16:40:36 UTC

spot

imvus August 17 2012, 22:26:12 UTC

They are breaking my heart!!!

I can feel all the pain they each are going through...

but holding is good, it's a step in the right direction. (nods head and wipes tears)

addicterated August 23 2012, 15:08:43 UTC

Fighting On/Tae is so really hard to write but I think it's important sometimes to write them mad at each other, so then you can get back to the lovie dovie. *hugs* Thank you!

k_a_r_l_a August 25 2012, 06:51:16 UTC

That is cruel, Taemin. Don't you know?

addicterated August 25 2012, 07:45:18 UTC

Taemin can be stupid sometimes, without meaning to be. Thank you for reading and commenting!