30 days of writing challenge - on/tae tremble day 3

[addicterated]

So today I'm really tired and I think this one is a little bit lame but anyway it got written. So booyah

Comments

[imvus]

they are talking...this is a good thing. Taemin gets to finally gets to see how much hurt Jinki has been holding in. Cuddling can go a long way.

[addicterated]

I see Jinki as that type of personality. He'd hold in as much as he could and put on a brave front as he did in the first ficlet. But he can't really maintain for long and all the anger and pain gets out of his control. *hugs*

[seungjiyeon]

I felt really bad for Jinki. I'm used to the image of a clumsy Jinki, or a dominant Jinki.

But a broken Jinki makes me sad.

I like the way you describe how he's clutching to Taemin's t-shirt, and that Taemin pats his hair, the imagery is vivid.

[addicterated]

Thank you very much. It makes me sad too but it's something I've been wanting to explore for a while. :)

[min7girl]

Awww. they ...just awwwww. I want to squeeze them.

[addicterated]

Me too, after locking them in a room together naked with nothing but bread and water and romantic love songs to listen to. :) Thanks

[k_a_r_l_a]

Onew will believe him. In fact, he will trust him. I wish he won't. But he will.

[addicterated]

He will, eventually. Thank you for reading :)