Masquerade - Crumbling [Series]

[addierabudabu]

Title: Masquerade - Crumbling (AO3)
Pairing: Juntoshi/Yama
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Summary: His father told him that love eventually happened. But no one told Satoshi how much he had to struggle to make it happen, or if it really was going to happen after all.
Disclaimer: I'd never be able to own them, they're Johnny's

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[dwf17]

Maou! Maou! Maou!

Also: :'(. Poor Satoshi-kun. Poor Sho-chan. Poor Jun-kun. They're all trying so hard and none of them are actually happy.

[addierabudabu]

I've posted my Maou fics already! (and I see that you already read them LOL)
Yeah well...poor them all XD why am I torturing them, really!
But thanks a lot for reading and commenting, dear! <3

[spacewhistler]

OH. MY. GOD.

My heart is breaking for Jun but YAMA, esp. at the end. TT___TT

*wails to eternity*

thank you so much for this. This made my day. <3

[addierabudabu]

Ngaawww im glad if i could help made your day! <3
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, dear! <3

[lilly0]

Oh my... the feels in this! O_O I'm not sure who to feel the most sorry for. Probably Jun. Because Satoshi's father basically hated and sabotaged him (the phone call... UGH) and HIS BEST FRIEND Sho stole the guy he loved (knowing that there was more between them) And on top of that he is all alone (there needs to be a hot guy around to make him happy ><) And then Satoshi... ugh, being forced into marriage, against his will. How horrible >< I'm wondering how this will end. At the moment all of them seem to be unhappy and it's so freaking sad. Is there going to be a solution for all of them

[addierabudabu]

Tbh, at first I wanted to make Sho to be the kind and gentle guy he is, who's in love with Satoshi and love him in the right way. But then I kinda make him a bastard here, with how he steal Satoshi away using all the way he could. Maybe I just want to show that even Sho himself have a problem, that he wasnt as oblivious as people thought. Because sometimes, love is like that - it makes you do all the bad stuff no matter what a good guy you were. I think I just wanted to convey that, somehow XD

Anyway! The last chapter is up already! There, you can find my solution - but it's 'my' solution though, so it might not as satisfying XD

But thank you sooooo much for reading and commenting, lily-chaaan! I appreciated it a lot! <3<3<3

[rifnaoei]

So broken hearted. Everything went a mess in the beginning. But seems like Sho then started to follow Jun advice to try harder, and did everything Satoshi like to do.

When Jun came and asked Satoshi to run away with him even Satoshi still have a feeling for him, I could say he also already gave his heart for Sho. If I don't interpret it wrong, in the end Satoshi choose to stay with Sho 'cause he finally in love with him, not just out of pity.

But then, it's not the ending. Anything can happen, but I hope in the end all of them can get their happiness...

[addierabudabu]

I dare to say that you're not wrong - Satoshi didn't choose him just out of pity XD
The last chapter is up already, and I hope I ended it in the right way...
Thanks for reading and commenting, dear! <3

[hatori_sachiyo]

I'm happy for yama! But I feel sorry for jun. :( I hope someone can mend his heart and love him as much as satoshi.

Maybe Nino could be a good substitute? *wink* XD he's daring after all.

Thank you for writing this story <3

[addierabudabu]

You can figure out who's mending Jun's heart in the next chapter (and i think you'll be pleased? LOL)
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, dear! <3