Uhm. I don't know.

Mar 09, 2010 21:20

Title: My Happy Ending.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot.
Warnings: Angst, angst, and more angst, with angst sprinkled on top for good measure. Also, the insinuation that someone has died or might die, but no one actually dies. Does that make sense?
Spoiler(s): None.
Word count: 1615.
Rating: Uhm. PG, just ( Read more... )

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nyargles March 9 2010, 22:11:27 UTC
NOOOOOO ;______; *weeps*

Poor Merlin. Poor Arthur. Poor Merlin/Arthur. But this was so well written and touching with the moments between them all magnified because of the first and second person perspective. good job!

*still weeps though*

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adeina_rhyddha March 10 2010, 17:39:41 UTC
Aw, thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm sorry I made you cry. =[

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archaeologist_d March 10 2010, 01:09:57 UTC
Poor Arthur. Poor Merlin. I liked that Arthur ran away from Merlin after he found out and then things went downhill from then. Good job.

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adeina_rhyddha March 10 2010, 17:40:43 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
I am rather cruel to them. Sigh.
I think that if Arthur did run away, things would be rather worse than I wrote them.
After all, it's Merlin that always saves his sorry arse, is it not?

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woodsgal March 10 2010, 18:35:21 UTC
Hey, look I commented before starting on my homework =3.

XD NO ARTHUR, DON'T GO WITH MORDRED...HE ISN'T A CUTE CHILD ANYMORE SO DON'T TRUST HIM...what...only reason I love Mordred is because Asa Butterfield is so friggin' adorable.

Lovely and angsty, I love the fact that the ending is open so you could turn it into a chaptered fic if you wished but I have a feeling it will end badly.

Ummm...what else...OH YES, IT WAS VERY GOOD AND NO ARGUING AGAINST BIZZATCH.

Good job.

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adeina_rhyddha March 10 2010, 18:37:33 UTC
Aw. x3
Thank you - I'm flattered.
Haha.
I wasn't going to write anymore on it.
I only got three comments, including yours. I be sad. =[
Anywho.
I'm glad you liked it. xD
I still don't think it was good, though.
Kind of...random.
( Also, none of the three people commented on the one thing I thought people would. Huh. )

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woodsgal March 10 2010, 18:39:51 UTC
There's still plenty of time for comments. Some people might just have not read it yet, I'm sure when you come online tommorrow your inbox will be flooded with comments.

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adeina_rhyddha March 10 2010, 18:42:06 UTC
Lawl.
I doubt it, but thanks anyway. x3

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orion_nightbane March 13 2010, 05:49:06 UTC
I like how everything did not work out? :O man, i feel evil. but yeah, i really loved how at the end, Arthur still wants to be with Merlin and might be taking that chance with Mordred?! even though we all know how it'll turn out in the end T_T

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adeina_rhyddha March 13 2010, 08:46:29 UTC
Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Of course Arthur still wants to be with Merlin - they are two sides of the same coin and all that funky romantic stuff, 'member? x3
Yes, well. Mordred slipped in there randomly. I should try writing something less angsty next time, me'thinks.

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hallayo March 14 2010, 01:23:19 UTC
ok the ending killed me too. i'm dead now but ahem, in a good way? :D

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adeina_rhyddha March 14 2010, 09:02:23 UTC
Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Yeah, I'm sorry about that ending...

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