Comments | adeina_rhyddha: I got nothing.

adeina_rhyddha

I got nothing.

Apr 18, 2010 12:03

Title: Just Take It Slow.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, Merlin/Other ( where "other" is unnamed person(s). )
Warnings: Sex, a non-con reference and and references of trauma from the past.
Spoiler(s): No.
Word count: 2466.
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: Written for this prompt at the kinkme_merlin ; Arthur fucks Merlin for the first time since Merlin was raped.
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adeina_rhyddha April 18 2010, 14:09:39 UTC

Were there really?!
I thought I'd gotten rid of all the mistakes. I know I got rid of spelling mistakes, because I read it over so many times. Sigh.
Anyway, thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

frakkin_addict April 18 2010, 15:13:33 UTC

That was so beautiful and moving. I actually had tears in my eyes at the end when Arthur says, "I love you." I absolutely loved this!

adeina_rhyddha April 18 2010, 15:15:20 UTC

Aw, thank you!
I didn't mean to make anyone cry, but it means a lot that you did.
I'm really, really glad you liked it. It always makes my day when good authors compliment me. x3

samsamtastic April 18 2010, 16:04:51 UTC

This was beautifully done. The effects that the attack had on Merlin weren't glossed over, but his memories weren't too graphic, and the act of him finally sleeping Arthur was really poignant rather than just smutty. I loved it!

adeina_rhyddha April 18 2010, 16:07:18 UTC

Oh, thank you - I'm glad you think so.
Yeah, I didn't want to go into too much detail about the attack. I wanted to focus on how it had affected him and what he was feeling now.
The prompt didn't seem smutty to me, right from the start, so I tried to keep it from being that way. I'm really glad that you liked it so much.

xmarie08 April 18 2010, 16:09:36 UTC

Oh, this was lovely. You've captured the emotions of both boys so perfectly.

adeina_rhyddha April 18 2010, 16:10:49 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you think so, because it was...interesting to put myself in their shoes, and try to think what they'd be going through. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

thisisnidge April 18 2010, 16:59:18 UTC

Got to comment because this was so tender, so real and so full of love. I almost thought it was going to have The Notebook twist to it, but I'm glad it didn't, in a way.

adeina_rhyddha April 19 2010, 06:58:38 UTC

Oh, wow. To get a comment from an author such as yourself has comepletely just made my day, so thank you so much.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. x3
Actually, I've never seen The Notebook, so I'd have any idea what that twist would be.