Do not even ask - it's better that way.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Title: Dares.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin..
Warnings: Utterly stupid boy dares. Utterly stupid boys. Lots of utterly stupid stuff, really.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 1860.
Rating: NC-17, because woodsgal decided she wanted smut.
Summary: Written for this promt from woodsgal ; Modern School AU. Arthur and Merlin are in detention

Comments

[adeina_rhyddha]

Oh, dear.
No, really, I don't mind.
I don't have a beta, and I have this curse where I am pretty much totally unable to notice errors in my work.
Where was that? I'll go sort it.
Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it despite my stupid errors.
...
I am so going to look for that now.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Gosh, really?
I mean, I am writing a lot at the moment in a relatively short space of time, so you wouldn't really get much of a rest. Plus, every chapter of my WIP is at least four thousand words long.
But, y'know, I'd love someone to read it over and point out all the daft mistakes I make and don't notice.
Aw, thanks. I wouldn't describe it as cute, but thanks all the same. xD

[ctkelly]

Oh man, I read this at work. I'm glad my boss didn't come into the room when I mysteriously stopped typing. =P Fun read, thanks for sharing!

[adeina_rhyddha]

Haha. xD
Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
...
You should probably do some work, though. x3

[mybrainsrmush]

Teacher walking in makes me giggle. Also, could you clarify something for me?
When Arthur said "I’m not. It’s just you - it’s always only been you.”
Did he mean that he had always looked at Merlin like that or Merlin is the only only one he's ever looked at like that (girls included) or only since they met in detention? Cause it doesnt make sense if he says that its "always only been you" if it only started then, you know?
Also, how old are they that they are in detention in school but still giving each other blow jobs?!? lulz :D

[adeina_rhyddha]

It made me giggle when I wrote it, too. x3
Hm.
Merlin said he didn't know Arthur was gay, and Arthur says he isn't. Basically, he's saying that Merlin is the only guy he's ever fancied.
Does that clear it up?
Sometimes I make no sense with my insane waffling, I know.
I have no idea.
Mebbe about seventeen?
I hadn't thought of that. Just blame woodsgal - it was her prompt.

[mybrainsrmush]

I did get that, but maybe you could get rid of the -always only been you.
It gives the impression that he's always looked at Merlin like that and that he's only been acting hostile in the beginning to cover up his attraction. (Which would work by the way -wink-)
I still think it's brill though :D

[mybrainsrmush]

dont want to be bitchy but just noticed - "clothes until they are stood their stark"
there not their :S :D