It doesn't get any better.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Title: Untitled.
Pairing(s): Merlin/Arthur.
Warnings: Uh. I can't think of any. 
Spoiler(s): Nope.
Word count: 257.
Rating: G.
Summary: I...I'm not even sure, which is worrying. There is a piano and sunlight and description. That's about it, really. The worst part is I can't even tell you when or where it is set, or who the narrator is. Really.

Comments

[lolryne]

aw :( ♥ this was sad and cute, i like you put a piano in it

[adeina_rhyddha]

That's why I don't know when it is set.
They wouldn't have pianos in Camelot, but then I kind of see it being set there.
I CAN'T BELIEVE I TRIED TO WRITE SOMETHING EPIC AND POWERFUL AND DESCRIPTIVE. I SHOULD JUST GO SIT IN A CORNER AND DO MY CHEMISTRY NOTES OR SOMETHING PRODUCTIVE.
Anyways, now that my rant is over...
I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the lovely comment.

[lolryne]

it didn't look like Camelot to me. I don't know '____' I don't think its matter, it works well this way!
Good luck :DD Homework is a mess!

[adeina_rhyddha]

I've no idea where or when it is. I don't even know who the narrator is - how the hell am I meant to know the setting?
Eh. I take Fridays off. It's just that doing homework will keep my fro attempting to write. xD

[umbreons]

This is really cool. I first read it in Gwen's perspective, then in Morgana's and I think that the latter works really well here. I can definitely see her observing this and thinking stuff like this. It fits. She's kind of the one who is really observant and compassionate when it comes to other people (especially her friends), and she also knows very well when one (*coughArthurcough*) is being a total idiot. So, yeah. :D

I love the 'openness' of this, and how you can kind of draw your own conclusion. Really nice, bb! <33

[adeina_rhyddha]

Aw, thank you. x3
Hm.
Like I said, I've no idea who the narrator really is. I can tell you who it ISN'T quite easily, just not who it IS.
*Shrugs*
Sometimes, that just works.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, because I thought it was a bit rambly and it didn't really make sense in my head. It didn't make much sense out of my head, either, but there you go. x3

[book_worm_vicky]

Oh wow. So powerful. The imagery was incredible, and the last section? I think you broke my heart. Amazing. I'm n awe, and speechless.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I still find it really, really bizarre, but it's good to know that people like it. x3
And speechlessness? Yeah, it's awesome.

[archaeologist_d]

Very sad. I liked the imagery - the gold and the black.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Still working on a reason for there being a piano in there...

[mychaostheorem]

Oh. I got goosebumps all over.

Amazing.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Wow, really?
Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. I still find it a rather strange piece, to be honest. It's what I come up with when I try and write in a style I'm not used ot.