This is a poem I wrote quite a while back, and it is one of the few (of my own) which I kind of like. To be honest, I don't really like most of my work... But here goes the moth
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This is such a lovely piece with vivid imagery, so abstract yet so precise. It really is quite wonderful. I also love the parallel structure you seem to have in stanza's 1 and 2; a fantastic repeated concept...It really is all so lovely. :) keep writing.
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This is such a lovely piece with vivid imagery, so abstract yet so precise. It really is quite wonderful. I also love the parallel structure you seem to have in stanza's 1 and 2; a fantastic repeated concept...It really is all so lovely. :) keep writing.
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