heart of the city

Mar 31, 2010 22:41

(As a pretext, I had the situation of Hong Kong in mind while writing this. To put it in the simplest, briefest way: conservation is a big issue over here. We have a lot of old buildings that activists want the government to conserve, but many times the government had to make decisions on whether to demolish them or not in order to make way for a ( Read more... )

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adenosine_tp April 1 2010, 10:50:10 UTC
Aw please don't say that. I didn't intend my writing to be "deep" or "philosophical"... I just write whatever comes to my mind. I love receiving comments :P just tell me what you think/ what emotions my writing arouses in you/ how I can improve... : )

you won't end up looking stupid !!!!!

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adenosine_tp April 1 2010, 10:50:29 UTC
yes, I had to use five exclamation marks, for added effect...

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cyanidecupkake April 3 2010, 02:52:39 UTC
Unclog congested veins to allow
blood flow. The network of
capillaries map the city, they
should lead to the heart. No?

that is my favorite verse.
you are an amazing writer.

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adenosine_tp April 3 2010, 13:03:44 UTC
wow, thanks :)

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