Because someone kicked me...

[adi_san]

... or rather, I was kicked by the promise...
Ok, I was oblidged to write it after dealing with my evening coffee. very first I had for maaaaany weeks.

Title: Devotion
Words: 475, a drabble
Series: Saiyuki, as always
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: hints of Ukoku/Kami-sama

He will look down at the creature, pulling at his white robes with its dirty

Comments

[geri]

So sweet yet sad and true.

This has to be nii and kami sama is it not.

why does nii treat him as he does?

[adi_san]

Yes, this is Nii and Kami-sama.
Why does he treat him as he does? Hm, I will leave this answer to the people reading Saiyuki and the autor herself.
Fans can only re-interprete it as they wish for.

[4bdnsn0wflake]

Interesting style you've written this in.

It does make me feel sorry for Kami-sama - he was very badly used and twisted by Ukoku.

[adi_san]

Thank you! :D

Well, considering that every one of us has a piece of good and the piece of bad in heart... His was made by that man who used him.

[sanzoskitten]

83 That was really interesting! :3

<3 <3 <3

[adi_san]

Well... Thanks :D

[meobnal]

Lovely disturbing! Perfect for these characters <3

[adi_san]

Oh, it should be disturning. Just like the two of them and their relations.

[purpleicicles]

Oooo, creepy! I love the sense of anticipation on Ukoku's behalf, of the yearning for someone he knows he can't have now, and the pseudo-Koumyou he makes in his place, nurturing until he can take what he wants... like I said, creepy :)

[adi_san]

I like replying to long comments >3

Creepy is one of the good words describing it, in my opinion (as well as my style of writing). And the pseudo-Koumyou thing...
I'm really pleased by your comment, because I can see that you got the fic right.