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FIC--Between the Bell Notes

Jul 14, 2009 09:57

Title: Between the Bell Notes
Rating: R (Mostly for bad swears)
Spoilers: Torchwood COE, thru Episode 5
Pairing: None, really, (although Jack/Ianto implied)
Characters: Jack, Rhiannon Davies
Summary: Missing scene conversation set during the 5th episode of COE-to say anything more would be spoilery
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

A/N: I guess you could say ( Read more... )

Comments 22

blue_fjords July 14 2009, 14:14:20 UTC

Good God, woman. You just ripped my heart out at work.

Shaky breath. That was *so good*. Powerful and clearly what happened. I could see that scene play out before me, and it was heart-wrenching. Jack's mental space right there -- gah.

He looked up at her and instead of the accusation and anger or suspicion he’d been expecting, he found pity, which was hard not to hate, just a little bit. One of the reasons he so desperately needed to get off of this godforsaken rock.

That bit about pity -- exactly. I'd be more coherent, but I'm distraught. Oh, Jack. Oh, Rhi. Oh, Ianto.

(But distraught in a good way -- you done good!)

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blue_fjords July 14 2009, 19:07:51 UTC

Forgot to say -- the quote you pulled the title from? Holy shit, how perfect, and perfectly devastating. I'm tearing up just thinking about it again.

Really, really lovely.

amand_r July 14 2009, 16:08:34 UTC

Oh, honey.

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amand_r July 14 2009, 17:43:56 UTC

OH it was lovely. I sniffled. Just a little.

ares132006 July 14 2009, 23:28:56 UTC

Sweetie, you know how much I love your writing, whether it be Angel or Torchwood.

Good point about TW and money. I think Torchwood would have insurance of some sort on their employees. Ianto's family would be looked after.

He lurched a little when she suddenly pulled him forward into a hug, and he stiffened immediately, but she wouldn’t let go. Unrelenting, this one. His heart ached briefly at the thought that Ianto should have spent more time around her. Her voice hitched and she was shaking in his arms, clinging to the back of his coat. “You were in love, weren’t you?”

Oh...just heartbreaking.

kel_reiley July 14 2009, 23:41:24 UTC

“However, Torchwood always did keep pretty extensive records of their employees.” He tilted his head at her knowingly and gave her a tight grin. “I never let on.”

o, i lOVE you for that
but now i'm crying again

electrictoes July 15 2009, 10:10:45 UTC

Oh God, that was absolutely and completely brilliant while being astoundingly painful at the same time.

It was... brilliant, seriously.