Fic: "Five Breaths That Gellert Grindelwald Took Away" [HP, Dumbledore/Grindelwald, PG-13]

[dharmavati]

Title: Five Breaths That Gellert Grindelwald Took Away
Author: sporkyadrasteia
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Why do these plot-bunnies come to me as exam week looms? It's crazy! :D

This is my first Grindeldore fic so I'm kind of excited. :)

Comments

[originalpuck]

Oh, very nice. I love the idea of Gellert being confused by Ariana. And the last two were just adorable -- they had such a vibrant sense of the contradiction that is Gellert. ^^

[dharmavati]

Thank you! I'm glad you found his portrayal believable... it's the first time I've attempted writing him! :)

[sivullinen]

ASKDJKLASDASLKD.

Me likes very much! For some reason, the Tom Riddle one was probably my favourite ♥

[dharmavati]

Thanks! :) I enjoyed writing that part too!

[meish_kaos]

That was simply brilliant. Breath-taking, if I dare say.

May I translate it in french, please?

[dharmavati]

Thank you so much! :)

May I translate it in french, please?

Oui! That would be great! I'd love it if you could provide me with a link when you're done too (as I really need to improve my French).

J'ai étudié le français au lycée mais je n'ai pas réussi bien mon éxamen final. Ça me rend triste parce que j'aime la belle langue française. Si on ne peux pas comprendre ces phrases en français, je suis très, très desolé :D

[meish_kaos]

It will be my pleasure ! ^^ I added you as a friend, because my LJ is friend-only and I planned to post it there. I'll link back to this post of course ^^ I also wanted to know if I could post it on Fanfiction.net too? Do you have an account there?

Mine is here : http://www.fanfiction.net/u/536249/

Sure I'll give you the link ^^ I wouldn't have done otherwise :)

Ne t'en fait pas, tes phrases sont très compréhensible, et il y a remarquablement peu de fautes pour quelqu'un qui dit avoir échoué son examen ^^

[dharmavati]

Yes, my FF.net account is here: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/291393/

Sure I'll give you the link ^^ I wouldn't have done otherwise :)

:D I just like to ask because the last time someone had asked to translate one of my fics, I had asked them to link my to their translation (just out of curiosity and anything else) and they never responded back. :(

Merci beaucoup! Je suis contente que tu peux comprendre mon français! Je n'ai pas pratiqué depuis deux ans et ma prof a toujours dit que je parles le "franglais" souvent, en réalité!

[dannybailey]

These are beautiful! I especially love the first two, with their tantalizing hints of life in the Dumbledore household. :)

[dharmavati]

:D Thanks! I do like the Dumbledore household myself and I hope you found my descriptions realistic.

[sleeper6]

Very enjoyable. Good job with this.

[dharmavati]

Thank you! :)