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adriatic_air

Chapter 6

Nov 04, 2007 17:12

Title: Bonds in Blood Chapter 6: ...In Which Hell Breaks Loose
Disclaimer: I broke my brain writing this. Although I borrowed Kiba's name from Naruto, and character from FastForward's fic, everyone else is mine and mine alone.
A/N: Hello to all yer faithful readers! Today I bring Chapter 6, which is full of fights and thoughts and intros to slightly ( Read more... )

bonds in blood

Comments 10

anonymous November 4 2007, 10:14:18 UTC

Hey! This is my favourite chapter now! You were totally right when you said you think you improved much, much more from last chapter. IT WAS SO EXCITING! And the right amount of action, and thoughts, and descriptions, and EVERYTHING was PERFECT! Really! COngratulations! I really enjoyed this chapter. Every part of it =DDDDD

You know, at first I thought that it was going to end after Dan's fight. Then I was quite sad. Then you wrote about Kil. Its so unexpected that she has an illness like that. Though I don't really see how she can lead them the wrong way if she is bleeding and they can smell her.

Oh ya, BOTTICELLI ANGEL! ANNE RICE! =D your story has many interesting things, I can't wait for the next chapter, and for you to reveal more things about Dan and Kil and Kiba and the way they fight and how Insignia works.

LOVES YOU FOR YOUR NICE CHAPTER!!! BANZAI!

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adriatic_air November 4 2007, 16:25:01 UTC

Omg, thank you for the extremely nice (for a person like you) comment! You are so hard to please, seriously. But yes, this makes me very, very happy! :DDDD Thank you for enjoying!

You know, I did hint about her illness at the end of chapter 4, but I guess you forgot, haha! Nevermind, it's fine, since you liked it unexpected!

Yep, can't get away with Anne Rice when you're writing vampires. XD *loves you too for the lovely review*

hitplayer(: anonymous November 4 2007, 15:26:17 UTC

YES YES YES NEW BLOOD. HOT VAMPIRES ON HOT INSIGNIANS' HEELS, hell broke loose alright. and i'm loving it so much! :D

okay to be honest I DON'T WANT REGALE TO DIE!! (hahaha secretly i am among that 45%, shhhh) i mean, who doesn't like an angelic devil?! <3 ( ... )

Re: hitplayer(: adriatic_air November 4 2007, 16:39:27 UTC

First of all: KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ( ... )

hitplayer anonymous November 19 2007, 10:19:15 UTC

guess what i just finished watching about 10 episodes of naruto s1, and i safely conclude that I DONT LIKE SAKURA THAT IRRITATING BYOTCH. NOT ONE BIT! hahaha and she gets in the way, a lot.

haha sasunaru, i am beginning to comprehend ;)

hitplayer anonymous November 19 2007, 18:48:29 UTC

YOSH. just found a weird anime which even potamayo cant beat!

check out MONONOKE; the colours and everything just freaks me out. EWWWW i havent watched anything scarier than that since what, lss.

Re: hitplayer adriatic_air November 21 2007, 04:58:38 UTC

oh wow. my other friend has just started on naruto too, and she's TOTALLY HOOKED. naruto's like, da best anime out there and nothing can compare to it not even bleach even though everyone says bleach is cool its actually boring compared to naruto. because naruto has sasunaru and all the stupid effers out there who say it dont exist have to go get their brains checked because they suffer from a stupid prolonged case of denial. and i am referring to all those idiots on DA who think homosexuality can only exist in gay animes like gravitation and loveless. CLOSE-MINDED FUCKERS!!! I HOPE THEY ONLY MEET PEOPLE OF THE SAME GENDER IN HELL AND HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO FUCK THEM TO SATISTFY THEIR SEXUAL DESIRES!!!

Re: hitplayer anonymous November 21 2007, 06:43:17 UTC

haha i didnt expect it to be so straight in the face! YOU said it was a canon, I think that the author is seriously just throwing it out the obvious. hahaha the kissing scene just got my jaw to the floor.

BUT NO! i think you should watch dgrayman, it is the best!!! :D

Re: hitplayer adriatic_air November 22 2007, 09:48:46 UTC

nu-uh... from what i've heard, d. gray-man is only about the same as fullmetal... and fullmetal isn't anywhere as wonderful as naruto. it has a good plot, yeah, but characterization and relationships-wise, i've only found honey and clover, asatte no houkou that can compare to it. and those are just simple animes with simple lives... whereas naruto is a successful mix of action and characterization, making it DA best anime to watch. it's legend already. :)

hitplayer(: anonymous December 3 2007, 06:05:56 UTC

DO ME A FAVOUR AND START WRITING SOON. internet writing is getting dry and it is so frustrating!! i need a good read, asap :(((((

maybe some kakaguy would be really ^^
HAHAHAHA:D