a sonnet

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When I spell the tale of our recent past

Comments

[natwithahat]

Dear, do you notice how you fall almost naturally into blank verse towards the end? You probably want to pay more attenton to employing iambic pentameter throughout the whole sonnet. Since it is a sonnet, after all.

[natwithahat]

i know i haven't really gotten the hang of the meter quite yet... i'm experimenting with new forms now, which is something quite new for me...