100, 99, 98...

Feb 18, 2009 12:26

Disclaimer: I wrote this while being made to count backwards from 100.We begin in a large house, dark and quiet. There is nothing about us, except the silence and darkness. We are afraid, but in a good way. Almost excited, waiting for something to happen, except we do not know what it is we want to transpire. We just want it to. Suddenly, a bird ( Read more... )

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undoing_ February 18 2009, 18:08:50 UTC
applause

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aduvingion February 19 2009, 00:27:27 UTC
is that sarcasm?

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undoing_ February 20 2009, 01:10:37 UTC
this is why i say our friendship is too tainted by snide comments! it was heartfelt. that is, if you really did count from 100 without losing the rhythm.

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aduvingion February 20 2009, 14:06:20 UTC
yes, the seminar tutor was leading the count so we wouldn't mess up the numbers.

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anonymous April 29 2009, 18:45:02 UTC
Ian!!!
You wrote an actual story during a free-writing exercise!
Either you suck or you're a genius.
Laura xxx

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