Lazing (a story, revised)

[aeb]

I decided to revise this story before posting it on a community. It's sequel needed revision more, but while I was at it, I figured I might as well look this one over, too. {Smile}

The tart taste of an apple fresh from the tree - from Akinaj

Also about Avilee and Forster.Characters: Avilee, Forster

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[aeb]

Thank you! {BIG SMILE, REALLY BIG GRIN}

I tried to strengthen that when I was tweaking this. I felt like I didn't quite know her when I first wrote this. {SMILE}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin