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aedalena

An Afternoon Lesson, Part Five

Nov 21, 2007 19:37

Title: An Afternoon Lesson (Part Five)
Rating: somewhere between PG and PG-13
Genre: Is "evil" a genre? No? Alas. Drama, flavors of action/adventure.
Word Count: 6300
Disclaimer: Harry Potter belongs to J.K. Rowling.
Summary: Leaving Godric to his own devices is a bad idea--it's even worse when Morass is there to take advantage of the situation.
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Comments 22

Ha! I'm First! anonymous November 22 2007, 06:10:25 UTC

I loved this part. It was my favourite section so far. I'm sorry to say I can't see poor Morass being belted up like that... actually I can. I would say my reaction was akin to Godric's. :)

And then the pitcher... hilarious...

Will we ever find out where Godric was after Marcus' coming of age... I dunno I think I've got a soft spot for Gryffindors in trouble. Good thing they excell at it.

Loved it. :)

Kyleigh

Re: Ha! I'm First! aedalena November 25 2007, 22:42:00 UTC

I'm fond of this part as well; it was a relief to write something a little more light-hearted than what I had for the rest of the story. That, and the research involved was fun.

Hah, the evening of Marcus' coming of age celebration? I can't say for certain if the details of that...eventful night will ever be fully disclosed, but I wouldn't discount seeing future hints at what happened.

Gryffindors in trouble...well, you're lucky--that happens quite a lot. ;) I'm half tempted to write a short piece sometime where it's Godric helping Salazar out of a fix for once.

Glad you enjoyed!

_silverfox November 22 2007, 10:59:14 UTC

LOL! Oh poor Morass! :)

anonymous November 22 2007, 20:05:00 UTC

Hahaha! That was GREAT! I loved it! Gooooo Godric! Like Harry said; he's a lot more insightful than the Gryffindor from the history books. I really love it you make them all human and that, despite his idioticness, he DOES know how to fight and duel! Haha! And poor, poooooor Salazar! Having to keep an eye on his reckless cousin like that! Hahahaha! Thank you very much! ^,^

*snickers* I loved the Morass beating. Serves him right! <3 Oh, question: What does Morass look like now that he's not creepy evil? :D

aedalena November 25 2007, 23:09:23 UTC

Hah, his "idioticness"? I think Godric prefers to think of it as his "sense of adventure," but he could definitely use a healthy dose of common sense to go along with his combat skills. Really, Salazar deserves some sort of medal.

Morass looks pretty normal--brown hair, brown eyes, normal skin tone, above average height, but he still has a general aura of creepiness, despite the fairly nondescript appearance. It's the way he smiles all the time....

anonymous November 23 2007, 22:59:12 UTC

Bahahahahaha!!!! That was awesome! Although it feels slightly... wrong.. to see Morass more or less helpless. I loved the duel, it was nice to see Godric not being a complete idiot for once, and the taking of the blood and the hair... priceless!
Salazar's reaction to the situation when he walked in was hilarious. It obviously wasn't what he was expecting.

By any chance, did that pitcher of water go flying past Rowena and Helga as well?? Now they must be really confused as to what's going on! All these summoning spells are kinda worrying me though, one of these days they're going to hit somebody! Unless it's Morass and a pitcher of water.... that's just plain amusing!

Sorry, not a whole lot of really insightful comments are going to come from me right now.. my brain is dead tired!

Awesome job as always!!!

~ Bri

aedalena November 25 2007, 23:25:38 UTC

I think Morass would agree with you about the wrongness of his situation. ;) It did accomplish what he had hoped, however, if through an entirely different method than what he'd planned.

Godric's lack of sense typically applies only to his own safety. In matters of duelling and tactics, he's rather clever--and just a little reckless too, but that comes as a surprise to no one, I'm sure.

Poor Salazar doesn't really know what to expect anymore. What he walked into had to have ranked among the bottom five of situations he expected to ever see either Godric or Morass in ( ... )

anonymous December 4 2007, 00:21:03 UTC

haha, I must admit, I'm now curious as to what those bottom five situations are... It'd be interesting to say the least!

And I'm looking forward to this next part with Rowena and Helga looking baffled! I understand it was holidays (although not for me, since I live in Canada) but a teaser or something would be muchly appreciated!!!

~ Bri

anonymous December 8 2007, 22:14:38 UTC

Hello???

Aedalena? Are you still around?? Where have you gone! I miss you and your wonderful comments and fabulous stories!

~ Bri

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