I know! So that means that "it wasn't the shinrabansho" who "erased" Yoite... I'm kind of hoping that that'll give him more of a chance of coming back... somehow....
I'm hesitating to accept anything as the truth until we know things for sure, hence all the quotation marks, haha;;;;
long reply is longaelphiaApril 25 2009, 00:09:12 UTC
@page 2 - I said 'texts' because I thought it would sound more like dry material... I usually think of literature more as written things in general, which includes literature and some not-really-scientific things like romance novels and such. The "-"... I don't know, english isn't my first language so I don't know what people think, I just thought the cooperate with the two o's in the middle looked awkward, because if I looked at that word and had never heard it I would probably pronounce it coop-erate.... haha.... >@ page 13 - 'instead of' flows much smoother than 'not relying on'! Thank you! About the second phrase: I used "and before we know it" because it makes it sound like the action creeped up on them, whereas "by the time we noticed" doesn't give as much a sense of surprise, which I received when I read those words.... I guess I wanted to give the reader the same feelings I got when I read the original texts
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Re: long reply is longshina_lunaApril 25 2009, 14:38:08 UTC
@ page 2: Hm... I don't call romance "literature". To me literature sorts of only includes scientific books and classic novels. Something you reference on. Something like romance goes for me under a simple "novel"... And when I read "text" I always think about short texts... But I suppose, that is more like a personla notion. ^^; (Or the German tern "Literatur" and the English "literature" have diffrent definitions, making them false friends
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Re: long reply is longeraelphiaApril 25 2009, 18:05:33 UTC
@p2 - I thought so too, until I was in the bookstore and saw "Twilight" in the literature section... The classics are separate from the literature section
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@pages 5,12,13 - thank you! I'll be sure to change these c:
@page 15 - I meant "actions", haha;;;;; *flail*
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"The will of the not yet known..." I hope we aren't being led on here, lol!
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I'm hesitating to accept anything as the truth until we know things for sure, hence all the quotation marks, haha;;;;
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It makes me wonder if he didn't give the hijutsu to Yoite as his last wish because he couldn't really figure out what his friend wanted.
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I-if you could credit me on a page somewhere, that'd be great 8D!
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Off to work it is!
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Now if Yousei shows up while Miharu is away the kitties interest in the scrolls will be explained.
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