Poem

[aelvampire]

Alright you guys must all tell me what you think of this poem. Now I want you to remember its not about me or anything. I wrote it just now. Just please this is serious tell me what you think. Thanks

Comments

[musicobsession6]

That is very good..but sad. And on the "For a simple pray can’t save her" part..it' "prayer" not "pray" Just to help ya! :)

[hauntdsnowflake]

WOW! thats IS really good...and it is sad... you are getting REALLY good at these poems..im proud of you Rachael!