False Paradise [YamaJimaShi Oneshot]

[aemrith]

Comments

[hime_cwaaaan]

This is really sad :'(
But I'm glad that this is a happy ending story :D
I hope the best too for japan, so they can keep strong and can make it through :')

nice fic, I like how you write the conflict. I almost cry when read this XD

[aemrith]

thanks so much for reading. i wrote this even before all the calamities happened.. we're all praying for them, and things will be okay soon, we keep believing. :)

really, really glad you liked it. :)

[lovelycanales]

*off to read!*

[aemrith]

hope you like it... tell me what you think, ne? ^_^

[lovelycanales]

It's really gooooood!! :))
I like the way it's detailed. so the readers aren't lost when reading it.
And the story's sequence are just... PERFECT!! ♥

[lovelycanales]

Like how Shida and Yamada ends-up together ;))

[columbin3]

OH MY GOSH!!
this is awesome!
angsty all the way but AWESOME!

I LOVE IT!

[aemrith]

haha! i didn't really know angsty its gonna get, but i'm really happy you liked it. ^_^ i'm glad i get to do this, yay!

[ryosuzuchi_chan]

hello...
first time commenting on ur fics...i force myself to comment this time...
seriously, this is awesome!!! really nice fic...
u make me cry by reading this...& it won't stop until the end...
luckily, it's end with happy ending...i'm glad with that...
but, the fact u make me cry juz by reading this is seriously something...
great story there...that's all i can say...:)

[aemrith]

i'm very happy to chose to comment, its nice hearing people's thoughts. gomen ne for making you cry, demo it makes me glad the feelings on the story gets to touch the readers. so yeah, may sound weird but i'm happy you cried. ^_^
i hop i can give more great stories for you to read! gambarimasu!

thanks so much for reading!

[mc_cressida]

oh gawsh, this made me cry.

>.<

You write the best fics.

[aemrith]

uwaaah gomen.. ^_^ it's okay now ne? this made me cry when i read it too. i thought i was being a little too cruel for yamada but i think it went okay, haha.

and really? wow...that's really something to hear, i'm soo happy! yay! i hope I can write more stuff that you'll like!

thanks so much!