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Africander - Chad

Jan 22, 2006 03:54

Title: All Who Wander
Author: Aeneas (aka Jerib_78)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: It's Joss's sandbox, I just play there.

Author's Note: This is for the Scatterlings and Orphanages Ficathon.

All Who Wander
( Part Two - Chad )

africander

Comments 10

speakr2customrs January 22 2006, 14:59:57 UTC

Very, very, good indeed. Fantastic atmosphere and a wonderful Xander; confused, hurting, and out of his depth, but compassionate, caring, and gutsy enough to just keep on going regardless.

bigsciencybrain January 22 2006, 18:19:50 UTC

Yay! Killer Whale of Approval! I always worry about writing Xander. He's tricky, like an exam. :)

timeofchange January 22 2006, 15:35:44 UTC

Oh, dear God. You are so gifted. This story totally transends fanfic, and I don't mean to dis fanfic at all here. Your writing is so intelligent, so taut, so powerful.

bigsciencybrain January 22 2006, 18:18:56 UTC

*blush* Thanks. The last 1000 or so words took a very long time to write.

rowaninfinity January 22 2006, 18:37:23 UTC

This was a really great story. You have a way of writing that really made me feel like I was there in Africa with XAnder. It broke my heart wgen Muna died. Will there be more? :)

aeneas_fic January 22 2006, 18:39:14 UTC

There's one more country to go, Niger. Originally I had 5 countries but two of those were supposed to go to someone else. So just one more. :)

lwbush January 22 2006, 23:29:14 UTC

My heart broke when Xander's did. She deserved better - but so did he. This is touching, and excellently written. I look forward to your take on Niger.

aeneas_fic January 23 2006, 02:23:44 UTC

Thanks. :) It was pretty sad to write as well.

iyalode January 24 2006, 11:00:17 UTC

I wasn't expecting that. Fantastic. In a rip my heart out kind of way.