Tequila Midnight, PG-13

Aug 06, 2006 10:02

Title: Tequila Midnight
Rating: PG-13 (mild language, mild sexuality)
Summary: Because that's what Mac's all about - saving innocent boots from drowning and drinking tequila with Weevil. Well, okay, the tequila was Weevil's idea.
Spoilers: Post-Season 2, through 2x22 - Not Pictured
Pairings: Weevil/Mac
Disclaimer: All things Veronica Mars ( Read more... )

mac/weevil, creatathon

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monimala August 6 2006, 16:46:38 UTC
I loved this from start to finish. Your Mac voice and point of view was just perfect and, of course, I love the way you write Weevil. I winced, I sighed, I winced some more. I loved how you brought these characters together.

only Eli Navarro could take vulnerability and put a barbed wire edge around it. What an absolutely awesome description. I wish I could frame it or tattoo it on me.

And the last lines knocked me over!

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aeneas_fic August 6 2006, 16:48:44 UTC
Thanks! I quite enjoyed this prompt actually. Glad you enjoyed it!

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likeadeuce August 7 2006, 23:19:17 UTC
It wasn’t like she actually had anything better to do than walk up and down the beach saving clothing in distress. Her mother called it 'being antisocial'.

Great Mac-voice! And I love the "2 more miracles and I'll be a saint."

This was so sweet and sexy and real. Awesome!

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aeneas_fic August 7 2006, 23:54:39 UTC
Thanks! I've fallen in love with this pairing actually.

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shealynn88 August 12 2006, 17:10:17 UTC
Holy moly mackerel. This was just...awesome. You bring them together so naturally, highlighting their vulnerabilities and their strengths and making the two of them fit together perfectly.

SO many lines to love. I love your style!

guitar rifts to augment the gleaming waves and melancholy piano solos to remind her that there would be only one set of footprints if she looked back.

Yeah. This was about the time I put on my headphones. :) I love how you show her lonliness in such a physical way--the one set of footprints. Made me shiver.

“My rich boyfriend jumped off the roof of the Neptune Grand. So I guess that makes him a rich ex-boyfriend, doesn’t it?” The steel in her voice surprised her; she hadn’t known it was there and hadn’t heard it before.

Wow. Never occured to me that he might not know. I love her reaction to it--heartbreaking and telling and I love her surprise and the beginning of this bitterness, where before she's been so quiet and easygoing.

When she opened her eyes, seeing skin and eyelashes, she ( ... )

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aeneas_fic August 12 2006, 20:43:36 UTC
Thanks! I have to say that it's one pairing I don't have to struggle with. LOL Probably because I'm a nerd myself.

I have more written of this fic...but I'm wary of posting it. Because, the truth of it is that he basically got some chick he barely knew drunk and had sex with her. Which is morally ambiguous at best. There isn't a happily ever after when they realize what they've done. At least, not right away.

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shealynn88 August 20 2006, 16:04:58 UTC
Well, here's one vote for POST IT!!! Because, happily ever after or not, I have no doubt that it'll be awesome, and I want in on the reading! :)

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nemo_88 August 30 2006, 14:53:37 UTC
So... reading sowell's fic made me love Mac/weevil, and I've been googling like crazy to find more fics of this pairing. I found this one... and I must say I really, really enjoyed it. Great voices, both of them, lovely writing.

Thanks for sharing.

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aeneas_fic August 30 2006, 19:44:08 UTC
Thanks! I'm quite enjoying this pairing myself. :)

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pixelarious October 5 2006, 03:30:30 UTC
Ah, Mac/Weevil. I will totally be looking to see what good chemistry the two have this season. Nicely done, believable and sweet.
One thing- it's a guitar "riff," not "rift."

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aeneas_fic October 5 2006, 03:32:27 UTC
D'oh! I swear, every time I read my fic, there are more typos. They breed. Or something.

And I'm really hoping we get some Mac&Weevil scenes this season...*dreamy sigh*

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