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aeri_s

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Apr 29, 2009 20:55

I hate you more than you hate me -

I’m nice - you’re not - I think you suck.

You’re crazy if you disagree.

( allow me to prove how my hate is stronger than yours - villanelle form )

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akirashockk April 30 2009, 00:59:24 UTC

You keep on saying that I’m three

Wait ‘til I hit you with a truck

win.

aeri_s April 30 2009, 01:38:20 UTC

Think I can beat J-chan w/ this? XD

akirashockk April 30 2009, 01:40:00 UTC

a truck, or the poem? she'd appreciate the latter, at least. i don't think she's suicidal though. >.>

aeri_s April 30 2009, 02:17:23 UTC

XDDDD BOTH!

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toko_shie April 30 2009, 01:42:34 UTC

you're crazy >=(
HILARIOUS poem tho.
drake will be amused. in a good way or a bad way...i dunno.

aeri_s April 30 2009, 02:18:17 UTC

Yatta! I will take that as a compliment XD

*laugh* She'll be amused, yeah, especially 'cause if j-chan holds through on her end there'll be two poems with the same "core" lines.

noctilucine April 30 2009, 02:15:29 UTC

<333333333333

8D

aeri_s April 30 2009, 02:19:41 UTC

I've been playing w/ that "bombs"/"grenades" line. The other version is...I splash grenades into the sea which fits the meter better but sounds more awkward...?

[More like, need to finish that sonnet lol]

toko_shie April 30 2009, 03:02:46 UTC

who is jchan o_o

aeri_s April 30 2009, 03:07:57 UTC

..Ah, forgot you weren't here for that all XD
Jaime.