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Ruby's Maze

Jan 28, 2011 13:00

Title: Legend of the Seeker - Ruby's Maze
Author: Aerows
Pairing: Cara/Kahlan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Contains Sex
Length: 5500 Words

A/N: Written for the Porn XI Battle. Prompts: Forget - Hurt - Truth - Love - Agiel

Ruby's Maze

The woman called Ruby rode solemnly in the back of the wagon as it bounced along the rough road. If the smell of hay ( Read more... )

fic: aerows, fic: cara/kahlan, fic: ruby's maze

Comments 46

lexus_grey January 28 2011, 20:02:26 UTC

Wow, that was beautiful. It went from heartbreaking to hopeful, and their passion was very artfully described.

aerows January 28 2011, 22:28:47 UTC

LG :D.

Thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.

As for artfully, well, I'm not as raw as some, though theirs is phenomenal, but I write as the story must be told.

*Grin*. You know what I mean.

soulsearchr January 28 2011, 20:10:05 UTC

This was really great!

I really liked the amnesiac Cara, nice twist. And the name Ruby seemed equally fitting.

*“Death is the emptiness I knew, longing for you without knowing what I longed for.”* - I loved this line, so romantic and just perfectly awesome.

I could just read your stories all day...they are so good and you are so talented.
Thank you for sharing! ;D

aerows January 28 2011, 22:26:56 UTC

Thank you SS, I appreciate your comments. I like that you singled out that comment, because that was one that rang in my soul as I wrote it.

soulsearchr January 29 2011, 02:13:11 UTC

Yeah it's really such a deep statement and it struck a chord with me as well. I think there's such a truth to it. I guess I'm just in a sentimental mood tonight.

On a lighter note though, I also deem you queen of "poetic porn" lol

chickinwhite January 28 2011, 21:12:46 UTC

AWESOME! Wonderfully written and the tension you build from a touching beginning to a blazing passion is ...
I can´t even...
and a few really beautiful phrases make this an absolute pleasure to read!
Thanks!!

aerows January 28 2011, 22:26:08 UTC

Thank you, Chick, glad you liked it, and the subliminal elements to the story. That makes me smile very widely.

I'm waiting for someone to mention the obvious subliminal, but that would make me a literature buff, waiting for others to dig allegory along with me.

eternal_moonie January 28 2011, 21:24:05 UTC

AWESOME story!!!

aerows January 28 2011, 22:23:46 UTC

Thank you

mayireadtoday January 28 2011, 21:51:54 UTC

Awesome: "It took the Mother Confessor seeing barely three strides and a swagger of hips beneath the dark cloak for Kahlan to know exactly who the woman was."

Very hot. Very fluffy with FEELINGS at the end.

aerows January 28 2011, 22:23:30 UTC

I didn't mean to let feeling creep in there, but ... gah ... with these two.

It's rather impossible.

Glad you enjoyed it.