Feeling sandcastle-y.

Mar 30, 2009 21:59

My Facebook status today:

Erin McNeill
was patiently constructed out of sand, water, and hope, just out of reach of the rising tide, protected by only a shallow moat; the sea and the wind will win someday, but not today.

I feel like there is a poem in there somewhere, but I am too busy to find it. Sarah said it was depressing, but I think it is

poem

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halfie March 31 2009, 03:40:08 UTC
I like it, and don't think it's depressing.

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aerynn March 31 2009, 03:41:25 UTC
Thanks halfie. :)

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agentelrond March 31 2009, 04:10:19 UTC
I think it's hopeful.

I guess it depends on how soon the reader thinks the sea and wind will win.

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aerynn March 31 2009, 14:56:30 UTC
I think Sarah thinks any time you confront your own mortality it is depressing.

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