Metanoia: Still waters run cool

[aescu]

Title: Metanoia: A lesson in humanity
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Castiel, Dean
Spoilers: none
Warnings: freezing cold water
Word Count: ~800
Summary: Metanoia means 'change of mind and heart' - and Castiel *is* changing. Becoming more human with all the ups and downs of a human life. Fortunately he is not alone: Dean and Sam are there to help and guide

Comments

[aescu]

Cas do you not think about the shrinkage!?!
Somehow I don't think he is familiar with that behaviour of the human body ;)
Or perhaps that's the reason he isn't bothered by his nudity? Because the water is 2cm cold?

[caffienekitty]

Interesting imagery with the wings. Although swimming like that in cold water, maybe angels are part penguin? ;-)

Incidentally, in your summary, " a human live" should be " a human life"

[aescu]

Incidentally, in your summary, " a human live" should be " a human life"
Oh crap... Now I have to correct that in countless places. Damn me for not being able to spell correctly.
Thanks for pointing out (it's funny you've been the first person to notice)

[caffienekitty]

I think most people just skim over things like that without seeing them (like me, obviously or I'd have noticed a while back XD) and fix them mentally.

Since you had mentioned before you were still developing your english skills here's the details: The word "live" is either the verb "To live" (liv) or the adjective (or rarely adverb) "live" (lahyv) as in 'live bait', 'live music' or 'This circuit is live.' "Life" (lahyf) is the noun. :-)

[aescu]

Theoretically I know the difference but being dyslexic doesn't particularly help with stuff like that so I am always glad when someone points out those mistakes :)

And I feel kinda dumb when I am still doing the same errors I did 10 years ago *blushes*

[vankoss]

this was nice and beautiful, the acoustic versin of lament of the highborne played in my head while cas was swiming. :D

[aescu]

Lament of the highborne? What's that? Sounds interesting :)

[vankoss]

is one of WoW's songs, its pretty beautiful and earie

official video by blizz

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=to8myfRJseA&feature=related

and the acoustic versions

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=feyxT9Ny6AM&feature=related

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lza2IJrI2Us&feature=related

[aescu]

Oh, WoW Music... I've got the Collector's edition - I think there was a Music CD in the Box, too. I have to dig through my moving boxes ;D

You are right, the song is very fitting :)

[mulder200]

I loved your description of Cas's wings and Dean's trip to the lake.

[aescu]

Glad you liked it :)

[laura_trekkie]

Awww Dean, all worried about Cas :). I loved the description of Castiel's wings and the cold, quiet surroundings.

Laura.

[aescu]

Awww Dean, all worried about Cas :)
Dean is soo protective ;)

I loved the description of Castiel's wings and the cold, quiet surroundings.
I really wanted to show the wings. Unfortunately that hat meant to burn everybody's eyes out ;) So I made only their essence manifest itself hence the translucent appearance. I'm glad it worked for you :)