Comments | aestheticated: nc-17. the words of the day. kakashi/sasuke.

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nc-17. the words of the day. kakashi/sasuke.

Sep 15, 2009 08:01

Title: The Words of the Day.
Fandom: Naruto.
Characters: Kakashi/Sasuke.
Chapter: 1/1
Rating: NC-17.
Wordcount: Roughly 1,300.
Warnings: D/s, light bondage, kink, toy use.
Summary: If there was anything he hated more than being told what to do, it was being ignored.
A/Ns: Naruto!fic cherry officially popped! Written for Kakashi's birthday over ( Read more... )

pairing: kakashi/sasuke, fandom: naruto, rating: nc-17

Comments 11

imlikat September 15 2009, 16:05:24 UTC

^__^ Oh yay! I really enjoyed this :D I love the bit about Sasuke's hair, the way Kakashi gives him that little bit of privacy, afterwards. And the ending, I'm yours... I'm laughing a little bit, thinking about how Sasuke's would take that (not sitting down, I'd think! XD) and it also makes me feel kinda warm and fluffy and happy ^^

hot_jupiters September 15 2009, 16:11:37 UTC

YAY, omfg thanks! He'd be SUCH A BITCH about it. And I just imagine Kakashi being like "teehee lol" at Sasuke's reaction and Sasuke getting EVEN MORE PISSED OFF. XD It's endless! Dammit, I need a Kakashi icon.

AND HA your icon! I almost made that my Kakasasu fic icon. It's so wrong and awesome.

imlikat September 15 2009, 16:21:39 UTC

Hee! What's cool is that that's actually directly from the manga XD Aaaand, here's one that's even wronger! It's my favorite :D

hot_jupiters September 15 2009, 16:26:30 UTC

*mesmerized* I think... this is one of the most awesomely hypnotic icons I've seen in a while. He just keeps going and going and going. @.@

And oh how I love the manga for its tendency towards batshit slashy moments like that. Sai/Sasuke oroike no jutsu?! WHAT?

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hot_jupiters September 15 2009, 17:08:02 UTC

YAY! Thank you! What a lovely welcome!!! I've been stalking Naruto fandom for the past couple of months and I just love it sooooooo, so much. I knew sooner or later I was going to end up writing something. >.> *sketchy look*

Oh man, whew! That's a relief to hear. I don't know, it's quite strange. My style tends to come out quite formal more often than not, but I really wish it wouldn't do that ALL the time haha. I need to work on that. ♥ AND YAY HOT.

cruelest_month September 15 2009, 17:18:50 UTC

UNF UNF UNF and damn that was hot and really well done.

And it was cute somehow although lol poor, poor Sasuke's dignity and pride. XD

frostheavens September 15 2009, 21:46:47 UTC

Hi and welcome! For your debut fic, this is incredible!. It's hot and plotty, with that edge of back-story. Absolutely wonderful characterisations too. I really hope to see you write more for this fandom ♥♥♥

aestheticated September 18 2009, 20:15:28 UTC

Thank you!! I really have been itching to write Naruto fic. I think about it all the time LOL, such a lovely welcome. ♥

k_undertoe September 18 2009, 02:16:54 UTC

That was delicious! I love how you still add the splash of the real angst (it IS Sasuke after all) but still make it SEXY as hell! I really liked it.

aestheticated September 18 2009, 20:16:17 UTC

Oh man, he IS an angst bomb, isn't he? Rightfully so (although how the manga's turning out is debatable... >.>) But YAY! I'm really glad you thought it worked. Thanks!