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Jul 05, 2005 19:59

alright. this one's not very good but its true. or at least for me it is ( Read more... )

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skippyrandom July 5 2005, 20:06:40 UTC

i'm with you on this one. the third one is definitely the best. i like the first two as well, and i like the idea of the first one the best....i have trouble writing about simple, normal, everyday things. for some reason i only get inspiration it seems, when monumental events in life happen. it sucks. but keep up the good work. i wanna see that painting too.

3 monthsssss

anonymous July 6 2005, 06:56:59 UTC

no offense but your poetry is about as deep as a puddle, self exspression through poetry is a good thing but you stick to the same form, it all sounds the same, sorry but its true....

skippyrandom July 6 2005, 08:29:23 UTC

self expression is self expression.

she's not selling a book, she's putting her mind and creativity on paper. don't like it?...don't read it. poetry doesn't have to be deep, and it doesn't have to follow any rules.

foad5489 July 17 2005, 10:20:41 UTC

If you feel the need to criticize at least have the common courtesy to leave your name.

I actually liked the second one the most, third one is good too, but for some reason the second one stood out.

-ford