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aetin

Gravity (Chapter I)

Nov 30, 2009 16:11

Title: Gravity
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Length: 5,380 (this part)
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: Kirk and Spock, from hatred to ambivalence. From aquaintances to friends. From best friends to lovers. All of the trials and tribulations in between. Starting right from the very beginning, all of the awkward friend-making ( Read more... )

fandom: st:xi, star trek, series, rating: 3 (pg-13), series: gravity, fic, length: 5000-8000, pairing: kirk/spock

Comments 15

coeurdesoleil November 30 2009, 19:24:30 UTC

Yay, the NaNo story is here! *does the happy dance* Have I told you how much I was looking forward to this ( ... )

aetin December 1 2009, 14:14:04 UTC

Exams aren't important!

And yes, Jim had a rough first day../days on the Enterprise. Every time I think about the movie, I wonder how it is that he was still standing by the end of it. As for his promotion, yes...I think his promotion was a bit unbelieveable, given that he has absolutely no field experience. As such, I think he might have a few issues when commanding, because he simply has no experience.

I'm also glad that Bones reminded you of TOS!Bones. As the story progresses, and the characters get older, I hope that they willl begin to resemble their TOS counterparts more and more.

Thank you for reading and commenting, as always. ♥

davincis_girl December 1 2009, 01:21:25 UTC

This is very interesting. I hope to catch the entire thing.

angels3 December 1 2009, 01:46:16 UTC

I can not wait until the next chapter. This was really great.

clancy_s December 1 2009, 10:44:34 UTC

I love your take on the characters and their interactions and look forward to more of this story.

(however I'm wondering -are there no dermal regenerators at all in your version of this 'verse??)

aetin December 1 2009, 14:08:34 UTC

Thanks for the comment. About dermal regenerators...I would have had Jim use one, but for whatever reason, in his promotion ceremony at the end of the movie, he still has very dark bruising on his face. There had to be some time in between landing and that promotion, (and furthermore, where would he have gotten scars on his face if there were regenerators?), so let's just say that Jim likes to take a natural route to healing? >___

dragonfly_s December 1 2009, 15:26:03 UTC

Wow, this is good. I've always admired people who can write epics and this is a damn good start. It fills in the blanks between the end of the battle and the promotion ceremony quite nicely. Keep going!