Bitter

May 27, 2010 22:26


Title: Bitter
Fandom: Glee
Rating: R/18A
Length: 3,260
Pairing: Will/Bryan
Summary: Will can't get his duet with Bryan out of his head, and after all, according to Bryan, angry sex is the best kind of sex.
Notes: Contains quite rough sex, adultery etcetc. Basically I couldn't stop thinking about all the sexual tension between Bryan and Will, and ( Read more... )

pairing: will/bryan, fandom: glee, rating: 5 (r/18a), length: 2500-5000

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tawg May 28 2010, 09:33:22 UTC
I love how, even during angry sex, Will was so thoughtful and chivalrous. Bryan Ryan is clearly the master manipulator here. Their dialogue felt very natural (I imagine that Bryan would seethe at being referred to as the understudy). And, you know, the sex part was good too :p

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aetin May 28 2010, 19:12:32 UTC
Haha, thank you. Will, I'm sorry to say, is sometimes a little bit naive. Bryan is so evil, I love him ♥. Thank you for the review! =)

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slionati May 28 2010, 12:57:29 UTC
HOLY HELL that was hot. I absolutely fucking loved this fic to no end, and probably will reread it no less than five times tonight, ha. The build-up was agonizing and awesome and both were so in-character it hurt. Clearly, this is the missing scene that would've made Dream On perfect. ;) Love it! You did an amazing job!

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aetin May 28 2010, 19:13:57 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! There seriously should have been some UST-relieving sex in that episode! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! ♥

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coeurdesoleil May 28 2010, 16:47:27 UTC
Hai gurl hai!! Glad to see you posting again :DDD

You just had the honour of popping my Glee-fic-reading cherry and you definitely set the bar high for others to follow ;)

This was so intense - great build-up, excellent dialogue - and HOT LIKE BURNING.

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aetin May 28 2010, 19:15:40 UTC
Hi! I didn't know you liked Glee. I'm glad to have popped your cherry ;). I've been busy and sadly absent from fandom lately, but I'm now on Summer break, so hopefully there will be more fic to follow.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks (as always) for the lovely comment. ♥♥♥

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coeurdesoleil May 28 2010, 19:35:34 UTC
I love Glee!! It's my happy feel-good show that makes me want to sing and dance and jump up and down in my bed and squee :DD I'm not very involved in the fandom though, partly because I too have been busy lately.

Enjoy your summer break bb!! I'll be looking forward to more new fic XD

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idioticonion May 29 2010, 11:13:59 UTC
Very, very nice indeed. I do like how you've made Will a believable angry top. Dialogue flows nicely and god DAMN it's hot.

lovely.

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aetin May 30 2010, 00:33:23 UTC
Thankyou! Believeablility is what I strive for. XD. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. ♥

I love your icon!

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snoopypez June 1 2010, 08:10:49 UTC
I'm so glad SOMEone wrote for this pairing. :D And such hotness, too! \o/ I cracked up at the idea of Bryan carrying condoms and lube around all the time just in case, because, well, if he's so turned on by anger ALL THE TIME, it IS a smart thing to do. XD

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