[One shot] - "Dusk Dark Dawn"

Jun 08, 2013 18:45

Pairing: Zoro/Sanji
Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Deals with prejudice, murder, intense psychological angst and guilt, violence, language, etc. It's not a happy fic. There also be smut. :D

Summary: This island didn’t have quirks or intrigue. No beauty or joy. It’d been nothing like the rest. “They hated pirates,” Sanji spoke, his eyes trembling with the ( Read more... )

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makai_thief June 11 2013, 13:55:49 UTC
Thank you very much for the story! With all the warnings you put up, I was expecting something much much more darker. Which doesn´t mean to say it wasn´t depressing! It was, in a way, but I´m grateful to you that you managed to describe the really drastic part in a very sensitive way, without going into morbid details (I´m sure some authors would be able to squeeze all the gore there is out of it!).
So I have to say I enjoyed reading it very much and I hope I don´t sound out of place given the nature of the fic;)

I liked the most the part (except the smut) when Zoro was able to reason with Sanji and help him overcome the trauma; always the level-headed guy, isn´t he? It´s so like Sanji to bottle things inside and let them eat him out.

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aevium June 11 2013, 17:47:40 UTC
You're welcome! It was just a plot bunny that I needed to get out of my head, so I guess it was more for me than anyone. xD

Yes, I definitely over-warned. But I figured I would much rather over-prepare people than under-prepare them. This fic wasn't the darkest I could do by conventional standards, but it was still dark enough to possibly offend people. xD

I'm glad you liked my subtlety with the intensive part of the fic. I've always enjoyed subtlety in writing and I try to implant it into my own writing whenever I can.

Haha, I'm glad you liked the smut and Zoro's consolable words to Sanji. Overall I'm just super ecstatic you liked the whole thing! Thank you very much for reading and commenting. <3 xoxo

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